Have you ever gone out as night is falling and had a wisp of a breeze pin you down and inject something into you makes you come within an nth of following it to its pad. . .however far out. . .to lie under black lights on a mattress half-cloud, half-star, knowing, just knowing another breeze will slip in to help you out before the shot wears off. . .then another, and another? Duuuuuuuuude, where have you been all my life? No tick, no tock, only the sssss of a hummingbird sipping. . .what?
. . .but you caught yourself in time? Slapped yourself awake, brushed the breeze aside and went in, set your alarm, crawled in a bed bore your shape? Smelled of bought scent? Nothing screamed summer. Like that.
. . .woke of course to a day like the day before, After. When you are blue, do you ever feel the breeze tiptoe up and tug at your sleeve? Needle slip in without trouble? Dream you went for real? Picture going back and finding photos of you but not. Don't smile like that. No poster neons Chill or Peace in our Time. Wings.
(c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2006 {All Rights Reserved}
"Wings" most truly. The language sweetly seduces and the passion blissfully dazzles. Therefore this reader is properly awed by the wonder and grateful for the splendor of a poem called BIRD IN THE PAD.
Aberjhani
"First there is a mountain, then there is no mountain, then there is..." Donovan. LOL.. What a trip this poem is, Pea. I have been there, though I doubt if I was really asleep.
Take care,
Sherry
Well this is the psychedelic sunshine of the soul! Tripping out on my blacklight and strobe. It is my belief we cannot deal with the most important things unless we understand the most amusing. Such internal thoughts here, Pea. Probably the most times we remember are those which we were spontaneously alive, doing whatever we wanted, anticipating the mysterious. How about a neon ping-pong match with Bird in the Pad, Pea?
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Impressive navigation through the mysteries of the mind. This poem brings many points to be studied. "Bird in the Pad" has given its dues to Poetry.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
love Tinka
Carmen :-)
Aberjhani
Birgit and Roger
Take care,
Sherry
Sage
Uplifting, soaring writing here; the opening was absolutely beautiful, as is the rest of this brilliant poem! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.