I do not want to love you
any more.
I do not want to see you.
I do not want to feel you.
I do not want you to feel me.
I do not want to care for you more
and more.
I do not want to share with you any
more.
I do not want to stay attached to the you I
adore.
I do not want to stay one with you.
I do not want to quiver at your touch.
I do not want to gasp when you bleed.
I do not want to feel sick when you get sick.
I do not want to lie awake when you can't sleep.
I do not want to feel faint when you get a shock.
I do not want to carry this torch
any more.
I do not want to hate you for loving you so.
I do not want to get afraid for you
any more.
I do not want to tingle at the tickle of your breath.
I do not want to grin at your gait and thrill
to the length and breadth of your hands
and hips, and delight in your shower-caused
cowlick, and marvel at the slant of your brows
and the curl of your lashes, and your wit.
I do not want to want you in me.
I do not want you out. I do not want you out.
Promise death will not take you. Then I will
not want not to love you
any more.
Nice work on this emotional tie and separation to death...it is a sad reality and yet a joy to know we have the love to reach out whether staying or going within life and the next...
Oh the agony that none of us make it out of this life alive. To think of your lifesmate's death is well penned hee. May yo both live a long time. Excellent. Liz
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2009
The things we do not want...always are there! Well written!
slip away to death's call each of surely will -- love with all of my heart and soul 'til the call comes -- I surely will -- and my love shall know the measure of eternity -- this is a wonderful expression of great sadness Phyllis Jean -- much love and peace my friend -- JMW
OH REALLY! NOw...
I hope your expressing words of sadness, loss and so much more!
You did that real well!
Love is Eternity I must believe!
GOOD LUCK Phyllis!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
If I promise you eternity, a voyage without end farther away from our Universe's lights, throwing ourselves in that pitch black darkness with the promise perhaps of other Universe,or not...will you consider loving him?
and death is indeed going to steal--but i would--i would cherish every moment 'cause those moments are worth every tear and i would do it all again and loose in death to have had the chance to love and share!!I love the write!
Boy that's the truth, scary but hey like Fee said
'we love while we can' A sad one, Pea. No doubt something
you think about as you get older and I don't want to think anymore lol
I'm sitting here, with tears running down my face ... to not have loved is to never have been loved at all. This one slices into the heart, causing a great pain - because we all feel like this.
I know. And when the one you love dies, there you are, chest cut open, broken heart on full display -
Your best, my friend. Is there anything you need? Let me know -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( *tears!!!!*
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2009
Yes love hurts don't it..
Great write Phyllis
Hugs
Ron
Wow! So Powerful! Hit my heart... cut it like a knife! I feel this and wonder why we love so deeply, even completely, and don't want it, because it hurts so much when (I know) it's not the 'right' one for me... Thank you for writing these feelings so extremely Well!!
Love and hugs, Suzie :-O xox
nice,,,,
Art Sun...
I hope your expressing words of sadness, loss and so much more!
You did that real well!
Love is Eternity I must believe!
GOOD LUCK Phyllis!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Georg
Gracias,
Aberjhani
Regis
WOW!! Death is out there everyday, and you have painted its' presence extremely well through verse . . . !!
Hugs,
Lance
Edwin
Love,
Becca~
peace, Carole~
'we love while we can' A sad one, Pea. No doubt something
you think about as you get older and I don't want to think anymore lol
hugs
Fee
I'm sitting here, with tears running down my face ... to not have loved is to never have been loved at all. This one slices into the heart, causing a great pain - because we all feel like this.
I know. And when the one you love dies, there you are, chest cut open, broken heart on full display -
Your best, my friend. Is there anything you need? Let me know -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( *tears!!!!*
Great write Phyllis
Hugs
Ron
Love and hugs, Suzie :-O xox