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The Silver Train Sped By
by Linda Settles Zebsokey → (All Poetry by Linda Settles Zebsokey)
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Speed of Life


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The Silver Train Sped By

 

The silver train sped by, the babe kicked in the crib

Every time he cried-- his mother tended him.

 

The silver train sped by, the boy went off to school

His backpack bulged with books-- but his mother made

The rules.

 

The silver train sped by, the boy tried out for sports

He found that he was good-- with mother in his court..

 

The silver train sped by, fuzz grew on his chin. He had his

first romance-- and mother saw no more of him,

 

Except in glimpses now and then, quick hugs caught on the

Sly— out of view of all his friends--as the silver train sped by.

 

The silver train sped by, and the boy became a father

Mother blessed his baby and bid the boy goodbye.

 

The silver train sped by, and a man with gray-streaked hair

held tightly to the handles of his mother’s new wheel-chair.

 

Autumn rains were followed by winter's last goodbye

The man released his mother’s hand as the silver train

sped by.

 

Another babe kicked in the crib--the third child by

his bride.  He dried a tear for mother as the silver train

sped by.

 

The silver train sped by, the babe kicked in the crib

Every time he cried--his mother tended him.

 

 

 

 

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Linda settles

www.RedeemingOurTreasures.com


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 Reviews of "The Silver Train Sped By"
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Wow! Can you imagine a whole life (and more) in a montage summed up in only ten short stanzas which encompass the whole circle of our generations. That is truly the problem with our silver train; it runs like the Lionel model trains we knew when young -- always running fast in an unbroken circle of momentary out-the-window glimpses of what we hold so dear. So well written :-)

Ted

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
I believe, in my humble analysis, that you are a fine writer, Linda. I find this poem thoroughly compelling. Thank you. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on November 10, 2008
Great title and analogy on a "train that we all ride to various destinations, none of them permanent here"
And I can't believe that train sped by and my loving folks have been put to rest and here I am on the other side: "in the middle of nowhere"

But: I read your bio: particularly like that first paragraph. Very meaningful to me, even if you had written no more. Thanks.
I too never finished the education I wanted; never had the career I wanted; tended my folks in their twilight years: And here "the Silver Train has sped by...
Later, michael guy

Reviewed by Donna Hollin (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
I really love this poem. The Silver Train keeps speeding by.....way to quick. I can't believe how quick my babies have all grown so much. I do look forward to the next stage and watching my children become fathers and mothers themselves. If only I could remember on a daily basis sometimes hourly basis that this too shall pass away I would invest every minute more passionatley.
Love Donna

Reviewed by Jennifer Mills (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2008
wow this is really cool. i am telling you... publish a book of poems

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on November 1, 2008
I like the circularness of this... if that is really a word...:~) Is this poem written in a particular form? Just curious...I have been working on trying a few different forms and I like the flow of this one and just wondered if it flowed that way naturally or if you had chosen this form for a reason...if it is a form... hee, hee... Sorry, I think I am tired and my brain is foggy.
Cryssa :~)


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