In the mist of winter
I need to feel your sunshine
The warmth of your soul
To be able to get past this cold
This chill that has taken over
It lingers so...
I need to feel your sunshine
The warmth of your soul
Your touch electrofies
Bringing us so close
My imagination always takes me there
Where I want to be
Where I need to be
Right by your side
I need to feel your sunshine
The warmth of your soul
We are not strangers
Know that my heart
Does not lie
It always shows truth
A truth that cannot be denied
Say you understand...
I need to feel your sunshine
The warmth of your soul
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Reviews of "Warmth of Your Soul"
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2012
Good last line in the first stanza, to leave the line dangle with "It lingers so ... " This gives an impression of that chill continuing... Thank you for being in the Den.
Such a beautiful tone and sentiment, Deborah; like a hushed soliloquy and mantra all in one; the repetitions "I need to feel your sunshine The warmth of your soul" is quite lovely and soul-touching. It's funny how that one special person can both shield protectively and energise all at once. Much enjoyed. xx
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