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I Was Saying 'Hello'
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Your eyes were gray
With a touch of blue

Your mouth showed
A smile that I had never seen

Your hands were beautiful,
Soft and sweet

Your voice was alluring
You spoke with truths

We said our goodbyes
Although I fought it

I was saying 'hello'

 

 

 


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Reviewed on May 18, 2012
Such a lovely revealing pen Deborah.

Reviewed on May 17, 2012
There are so many lovely souls that pass by us in life. We have the desire to hold onto them for they are a beam of light to us. Often they are sent to brighten our day, to say you are loved. They know, as do you within your soul.

Lovely Deborah

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed on May 16, 2012
Sweet sorrow!

Jane

Reviewed on May 16, 2012
this is a very clever poem, I like what Ron said,isn't it always that aggressive person knocking you over to shake the other persons hand or something. So best to learn several phrases, as Vickie stated, so at least the whole thing can be confusing....but, anyway this very good!

Reviewed on May 16, 2012
I have moments like these from time to time
someone wants to carry on with their day...or something
and I'll want to spend time well past hello...
Oh sweet to see the glimmers that shine in the eyes
and the hand gestures that show a persons soul...

how about this: (with a lil we bit of me Irish accent)
ELLO....
Cad é mar a tá tú? (how are you)
Bail ó Dhia ort (the blessing of God on you)
I shalnt say good-bye instead I shall say
Till Next Time :)

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 16, 2012
pithy and tender and so much said
and not said
i like this very much

john

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 16, 2012
Ahhh those magic chance encounters can be dead ends or the beginnings of wonderful relationships....nice capture Deb
fee

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 16, 2012
Contrary minds can never meet, no matter how the eyes entreat.

Ron


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