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On the Right Track
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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It will be what we learn
In all we do
All the times we got burned
And did not know what was true
Life went forward
As we were still going backward
Not knowing what to do-
We  eventually fell in love
With so much commotion
Everything was out of whack
Finally it all came together
We were on the right track 


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 Reviews of "On the Right Track"
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on March 2, 2013
Sometimes on the wrong track, but
that is what it takes to know when
we are on the right one...Deborah,
loved your journey as written

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 1, 2013
Being on the right track is truly marvelous.

Reviewed on February 28, 2013
Just watch out for the switching yard!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2013
"...fell in love/With so much commotion" that is tremendous, Debrorah. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 28, 2013
love has a way of doing that as you have written for us here
budd

Reviewed on February 28, 2013
We eventually get on the right track :)
Sometimes it takes some longer and the strongest
get through it even in the worst of commotion :)

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on February 28, 2013
And its grand when that happens!!! Took me a long time to find the right track...giggle...

Anna

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 28, 2013
Hooray for the right track! They are out there, these right tracks, it's just difficult to find them in the maze of contradictions which surround them . . .


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