A Memory of Many (poem) by D. L. Vegas on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 6, 2015

unfortunately it is usually a bittersweet scene many in love have experienced...sometimes one wonders if that magic is like the new car smell when you first get in a new car and eventually without thinking it fades and then you wonder what happened to that magic and when did it all disappear?
Amor

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2013

The image of fingers exploring and one last kiss... complement the picture perfectly ... a potent tone set by the juxtapositions of these images... a potent poem... lovely.

Roger

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on June 12, 2013

A rose waiting for the sun
to dry the dew *Deborah*
Perhaps..

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 12, 2013

VERY SAD BUT BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on June 11, 2013

I see it to be dialogue in a daytime soap...it's a compliment to The Bold and the Beautiful, Deb...the female soap star I can hear saying these lines...sometimes to sell poetry, we have to put it in other formats and package it in a different light...poet today, soap writer tomorrow...

Drama & Love's Memory
Sage

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on June 11, 2013

I know I am loved :)
We all know, we ask why but know the answer...
Hugs

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 11, 2013

oh the emotion engaged within
these lines is heart wrenching
how many of us have left & too
been left...but how awesome Dr. Hook is
you'll find "Better Love Next Time"

Song Thongs & New Heels
Vickie

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on June 11, 2013

Hopefully it wasn't just a passing fancy...it's sad when love is one-sided...nicely penned, Deborah...

Anna

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on June 11, 2013

Lovers who leave us hanging...sometimes increases our desire. Beautiful questions asked in the interim!

Peace,

Dayvid

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 11, 2013

Reads like your lover was a tramp.

Ron

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on June 11, 2013

I can relate so well to this. I hope it all works out the way you want it to and if it doesn't I pray you a speedy healing.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 11, 2013

Glad I never had to experience such a loss of love, it would have devastated me. Powerful poetry that grabs at the heart and won't let go.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 10, 2013

I am living this at this very moment. Thank you, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 10, 2013

D.L.,

Unfortunately as you said, this is true for many. So sad.

Many blessings,
+Linda

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on June 10, 2013

i hope the answer was the one you want
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on June 10, 2013

Such heartache within the lines of this very sad, but somehow the words you write are not written with complete defeat. You have gathered lines of wanting and hope within the questioning of "You said you loved me." Beautiful, Deborah.