beautifully poeticized Deborah
"When a love dies" either in physical death
or through ending relationships we all know
the deep wounds of losing the one we love
Reflections of the broken hearted are always so sad. I like the way you wrote the fragile feelings of the abused. Nice work!
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2013
The way it came out is the way it feels, isn't it? These three concise movements read as a triage, a triplet, and three-step progression of loss. Keenly effective. ~~ Diana
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
Regis
"When a love dies" either in physical death
or through ending relationships we all know
the deep wounds of losing the one we love
Eternal Balms & Heart Shaped Clouds
Vickie
with Your sadness, Deborah
wishing I could glue the
pieces back together..
Lady Vivian
Anna
Cheers,
Dan
Love ya!
Jane
Ron
budd