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In the Dark
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
Monday, January 26, 2015    Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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They sat by the bar
Listening
To the band
One took the other's hand
Jell-o shots
Is what they were drinking
The one wanted
To sit at a table
She wished
To stay where she was
Finally she was persuaded
That table was way in the back
In the dark
For those who wanted
Privacy
Let's just go home
No, said the other woman
It is the excitement
Of doing something
In the open-
They started out
With kissing and then-
Unbuttoning
Zippers opened
Hands entered
Giving relief
In the dark
 

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Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on February 5, 2015
Risk... often has unique rewards; one of which is relief and... release. Very daringly penned! -- Jeff Mason

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on February 3, 2015
Very sensual indeed. well done.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 31, 2015
clever, real and sensual ...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 31, 2015
great write D L liked the ending
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 28, 2015
Wow one sensual poem you know how to do this!!!!
Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on January 28, 2015
That's what you call spicing it up, and that's how to spell relief.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Christine Volkoff (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2015
Jello shots??? Never done that! A curious drink, but the effect seems to be a good one...Nice, fun write.

Reviewed on January 27, 2015
Very sensual and real. Well penned Deborah.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 27, 2015
Love this, Deborah; it is passionate and enticingly engaging too. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Carol Ann Phelan
Reviewed on January 26, 2015
Smiles! What a trip...to giving relief in the dark!

Wishing creativity and bliss!

Carol Phelan Aebby

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 26, 2015
I'm all eyes, ears, and hands for this one! Naughty naughty…

Ron

PS. Never had a Jell-O shot. How do you drink something that you have to eat with a spoon because you can't eat it with chopsticks? ;-)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 26, 2015
There is no end to amusing ourselves.

Reviewed on January 26, 2015
Just doin' what we do. 'Loved it!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 26, 2015
Danger makes it all the more exciting.


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