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Tempting Third Rails

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Chance and safety comes in many sizes.

Monday, March 18, 2013


Poem Artwork
Tempting Third Rails

20's say flirt with it
40's say not on my watch
60's say made it across the tracks

Home free

Off the retiree goes
golf course by day
country club by night

Home free...not quite

Off the semi-retiree goes
part time work at home by day
TV at night for vicarious ventures

All sense

Third rail respect
sees no difference
from 20 to 60 and beyond
grasps third rail warnings
never flirts
never assumes immunity'
never considers getting too far
out on one's limb

Third rail addiction
knows not retirement
always ready to open locked doors
wanders through parks at night
views chance as mind-transfusion

Existence-rides
like a a subway schedule
come along less often after sundown
making but fewer choices
these starts and stops

Still

Anxious rush hours easily avoided
provide but leisure movement
car to car
platform to platform
late nights
early mornings
have-tos no more

Spoil alert

Choice is king
always has been
third rail its queen
always reminding
"Beware"

For

Just as "Danger"
is merely another person's way
of saying "ne touche pas"
so too
Life's third rail
says "heed" to some
"come closer" to others

Flirting learned early
remains an option
an awareness
a forever reminder
forward motion never proceeds by itself

Hear it now
Time's playful third rail
the click and clack
the spark and fire of mischief's soul 


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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 19, 2013
I think I understood your message this time. When asked "what sign were you born under?" I usually reply "don't know, but I was probably conceived under the sign 'stay off the grass' which would account for my being a third rail kind of guy. Am I close?

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 19, 2013
An interesting concept, Very well expressed in your analogy of the third rail powering the subway as a metaphor for risky behavior that some indulge in and others avoid. There is a difference between night and day and right and wrong. I prefer to head out into the night and see what trouble I can find, yet avoid direct confrontation with it, but observe how it behaves.

Ron

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2013
Funny, I had not previously heard of the third rail, but somehow I sense that I have been on intimate terms with it for most of my life... even been 'off the rails' for a third of my life at least... still and all your fascinating poem is a moving feast for thought... I like the way you tease out imagery for each generation and leave the reader with an tasty teasing bit of onomatopoeia: "the click and clack the spare and fire of mischief's soul" ... lovely line! Way to delve into the depths of our diurnal forays and fecklessness (for some) while also putting the stop-watch on the way others wile away their hours (in or out of their ivory towers)... oh the games people play, now... every night and every day now... never meaning what they say, now... never saying what they mean... ("forward motion never proceeds by itself")... as always, Odin, this poem is a pleasure to read.

Roger

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 19, 2013
i can see where some will not know of the importance of that third rail
budd

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 19, 2013
Always gave a lot of room to the third rail as a playful kid. I like the way you wove your poem using the third rail as the spark that moves the train of your thoughts right along. Great poetry.

George

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 19, 2013
I must admit that I continue to flirt with that third rail - and I should know better.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 18, 2013
the images rattle along the rails
of thought here, such momentum in thinking
and expression
"...views chance as mind-transfusion.."
is outstanding!
done it again, Odin!

john


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