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Raindrop Wanderings

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

We often forget how complex the journey of a raindrop might be,

Sunday, August 23, 2026


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 Raindrop Wanderings

 

 

I fall from a cloud's soft workshop,
a bead of sky threading through cold air.


Sometimes winter grips me in crystal fingers,
and I become snow, drifting like a feather made of light.

There are times I harden into ice, a clear stone of silence.

As I descend, I gather stories:
smoke curling from chimneys, dust from tired roads,
golden pollen floating like tiny suns.


I carry gifts and scars alike,
a small glass traveler wearing the fingerprints of Earth.

I run through rivers that twist like silver snakes,
spread across lakes that hold the sky in their mirrors,
and roll into oceans, vast blue lungs breathing against the shore.
There I collect both wonder and weight:
the sparkle of mountain minerals,
the cool scent of pine forests,
but also oil-dark stains, bitter chemicals, and forgotten trash.


Sometimes I feel like a child carrying wildflowers;
sometimes like a pack animal bent beneath sacks of sorrow.
Every current pulls another burden into my transparent heart.

Then sunlight lifts me in warm invisible hands.
Puddles, rivers, and oceans evaporate;
water turns back into pure gas, into water vapor.
The heavy chemicals, dirt, and salts stay behind on Earth,
left like old coats abandoned at a doorstep.
Only clean vapor rises to form new clouds,
and the cycle largely resets.

I am born again, bright and unburdened,
a clean breath climbing the blue cathedral of the sky.

 

At the window, a child watches raindrops race down the glass,
their winding trails like tiny rivers searching for the sea.
The child presses a hand to the pane and whispers,

"Why does it rain?"

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 24, 2026
What a beautiful way to trace the water cycle! One of your best the way you cover all aspects of water's movement through that won cycle that brings us freshwater even though we try so hard to destroy that freshness unknowingly with our rush to consume every product thrown at us by advertising. A poignant way to look at it, like the little child.

When I was standing alongside a doctoral student, marble like a child at Niagara Falls. He said, "I wonder where all that water comes from?" He should've known. But he was very politically savvy and retired recently as dean emeritus and professor of science and technology at Kent State University.

So many don't know where our water comes from…if only way they would read your work here.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 23, 2026
A gentle, luminous meditation on the life of a raindrop. I love how you turn water into a wandering soul—gathering stories, burdens, and beauty before rising clean again. The imagery is tender on the one hand yet profound on the other. A lovely poem.


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