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Cirque Calder Family

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There is a childlike quality of creation that is maintained throughout Calder’s life. We should be so fortunate. So, a bit of prosetry for imagining what his studio life might have been like. To watch him in action, go to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t6jwnu8Izy0

Tuesday, March 19, 2013


Poem Artwork
Cirque Calder Family
by Odin Roark

Lonely this
My restless paint blobs
Absorbing precious air
Risking dehydration
Moisture deprived patience
Waiting atop my platform
Resting precariously upon cut wire
And tapered metal sheets
Awaiting tomorrow's work load

Master catnaps
Sprawled beside more wire and metal sheets
While real cat
Possesses Master's bedding
Her throne
Her mattress

All around
Bright colors crave daybreak
As studio fans drift their meager air
Turning delicate shapes meekly
Their kinetic fulcrums never idle

Other imaginings stand stoical in ring two
While ring one and three
Await trapeze figures
String ropes adrift

Large nocturnal mobiles
Idle patiently
Reflecting unfinished Big Top pieces
Table and floor installations
Galleries waiting

Catching moonlight
Wall doodles and sketches
Tarry further inspiration
Like my inspiration
The indubitable smell
Texture
Emotion
Only my paint dapples
Smeared on his faithful
Monsieur Palette can provide


Of course
Beside me
Always beside me
Tireless Pinch Nose
Holds I'm fay
Tough guy
Pliered twisting and crunching
Bent on convincing me
We're just tools
Says he

Not so
Says the Master
You're part of family

And so it goes
Brief respites
While imagination
Envisions its next
To be

Illusory reality
Remaining child-like
Understanding little of rest
A catnap?
Maybe
 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 20, 2013
A great profile of the tireless master. Like me, he slowed down at times and sometimes stopped to sleep, but his kinetic devices continued on and on, like life itself.

Ron

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 20, 2013
one artist's personal and wonderfully
imaginative and 'different' circus
paid due respects by a poet who knows
not only what lies inside the big tent
but soberly outside it, as well;
this, Odin, is fine

john

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 19, 2013
a wonderful tribute
budd

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2013
All around

Bright colors crave daybreak

As studio fans drift their meager air

Turning delicate shapes meekly

Their kinetic fulcrums never idle



There is a sententious (and I mean this in the positive, affirmative sense of 'pithy' and 'aphoristic') sentience, an energy with a vivacious viscosity about these personified objects... you invest your ode with such vivid life, Odin... such a restless vigor of vitality that one can only assume the artist more than merits this mirthful and highly lauditory portrait as much if not more than most close readers will most assuredly enjoy reading it! (I know I did.)



Roger

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2013
This poem of yours radiates vivid imagination and invention. I saw the five-minute film of Calder in action and see well of that which you write. The emotion and significance that your words add to the vision of Calder performing, make more of those five minutes than those five minutes. This is remarkable. I find, this time, I cannot discern who/what the first-person voice represents, but it doesn't matter to me here, because you have encompassed the entire circus in the word 'family,' as in all-in-one. So, it could be the paint brush shoulder-to-shoulder with the pinch-nosed pliers, or a board or anything at all speaking with just as much effect and relevance. All of stanza three is extra marvelous - "Bright colors crave daybreak" -- love that....and the mobiles in the slow-fanned air, ""Their kinetic fulcrums never idle," is language alive and moving. I love the pliers "Bent on convincing me." Rightly do you speak of "other imaginings" with respect to Calder...his engineered mouse? looked actually alive. You honor Calder with this writing. ~~ Diana


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