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Recess Bell

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Some are still asking: Is that all there is?

Wednesday, April 10, 2013


Poem Artwork
Recess Bell

Where'd it go
That twice a day relief
Leaving behind blackboard's chalk-lines
To immerse in the blacktop chalk-lines

That place where hop scotch
Poison line
River ball
Target ball
Quickly made chalk nubs
Made innocent everyone's fun
Made sad classroom returns

That ringing in our ears
Announcing freedom time
Now but a morning and afternoon
Workplace coffee break
Signaled by silent bells
Company rules
Good for morale

Where'd it go
The real breaks of our youth
That escape from control-seeking minds
Racing across playgrounds
Making sweat that was real
Laughter that was infectious
Exhaustion no amount of
Head-time on the desk
Could relieve

Chalkboards out
Monitor screens in
Grownup hours made endless
Stress related focus
9 to 5 at the desk
7 to 10 at home-office sanctum

Homework
The evolved institution
Resulting in maybe...
Possibly getting...
A gold pen?
A gold watch?
A golden parachute?

Maybe?

Recognition
Reward
Life's profit margin
Remaining ever questionable 


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Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on April 12, 2013
Metaphorically speaking, Odin, you've found

a wonderful way to wrap words around life's

active stages (in hands of others), used

the bell to symbolize the longing for toll

to free us from the ad hoc malady and for

a short moment be....just... "me", "us".

Early in life, when the bell toll we dashed out

onto the playground, began chanting (nothing to stop it),

later arrived at adulthood much with the same

discomfort (less options) only to realize "the working life

is a waste of time!", with hope now...to get some

wake up! bell sound, get out of this.........,

quit working (start to be "me", "us", again) before

heart will......last bell....not to be enjoyed!!!!!!











Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 11, 2013
Two things come to my mind. First, we all need a break to get together and just socialize. I used to go to the lunchroom every day and shoot the shit. That deteriorated to eating alone in my desk while keeping one eye on the computer. One of the latest edicts from our wise superior was that we weren't allowed any breaks anymore and only one half hour for lunch.

My second thought is that children need unsupervised play with other children in order to develop strong social behavior traits. Parents today are so afraid that they smother their children with protection from social interaction with peers that is very good for them.

Your question is, are we living, or are we living well? I prefer the latter.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on April 11, 2013
Life's profit margin - contrasted with real sweat and infectious laughter - let me see, now. Thanks for the golden pen jab ...

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on April 11, 2013
this is a thought provoking well written piece
budd

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2013
For me this reads as a marmalade of tart rinds of forlornness and juicy sweet remembrance. Stanza 4 is loaded with reader identity, and I love it. "Making sweat that was real" carries a deeply-meaningful comparison to office stress sweat that is so unreal. The flow of this has the sensation of beginning in color and ending in black and white. Very effective, Odin. ~~ Diana


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