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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Screenpoem Pitch

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A prosetry construct of a surreal video poem.

Sunday, May 5, 2013


Poem Artwork
Screenpoem Pitch
by Odin Roark


Night
Empty wet ghost town street
Work lights spotted
Tumble weed shadows
Like vehement crusted webs
Gila monster stares vacant
Fat lady carries midget man to bed

Lions sleep
Elephants sway trunks
Phillip Glass sounds undulate

Horses prick ears
3 legged cat wails
Cat turns into old woman
Tumbleweed shadows chase woman

House trailer bathed in pink light
Fat lady steps in
Crazy mirror makes fat lady thin
Young
Crazier than old
Old woman changes into trapeze bikini

Lion tamer and young old lady kiss
3 legged cat scurries under bed
Lion tamer drops to knees
Pleads his love
Snaps whip
Cat hisses

Distant lightning

Trailer pink turns blue
Thunder rocks trailer
Rain washes trailer away

Old woman
Fat again
Walks in desolate rain
Swirls cotton candy around tongue

3 legged cat jumps in lion cage
Stares at lion
Missing leg scratches ear
Dreaming
Purring
Lion growling

Quiet

Oh so...

Quiet

Fade out



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 6, 2013
The circus images in a western setting are quite vivid. Even the idea of a flash flood. I sure would like to see the video of this. A reality show like Freak Show.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 6, 2013
a varying way to view what you have given us here
budd

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2013
...like a baroque riff on an electrified acoustic, an aromatic whiff of carnival coquetry amplified in quaint overtones of evanescent phosphor, then spiced with shades of darker carnival forces where something wicked (wicked in the sense of connoting an affirmative intensifier) this way comes out of the fantastic into suffused and spectral twilight, and haunted like a lost and phantom limb in the limber lost dusk of a bodily transference that feels for all the world like an out of body experience whose sentience overlaps with a force of nature and whose essence is a transcendence anthropomorphizing from an ethereal space beyond time... and out of this world... (Mr. Bradbury would approve! as do I...)

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on May 5, 2013
~Odin~
Ever changing scenes of surreal all wrapped up in less
than a moment then quiet..Splendid!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 5, 2013
Son of a gun if this isn't just so life like. Will send me to bed with a purr.

G

Reviewed on May 5, 2013
that was cool.


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