Odin,

Enjoyed your poem, Odin. You have a perception of people and things that is remarkable. I love your work very much.

Love and blessings,
+Linda

Perfectly phrased and purposefully poignant.
Sets itself firmly in the mind for future perusal.

According to the grand scheme of things, all living things must die and be replaced by their offspring, genetically better to occupy the niche provided for them. We humans have broken out of our niche and now are occupying everything. According to your poem, I hope we can all die with a clear mind. There are some that will, like Andrew Carnegie and Bill Gates, do this while they're still alive, but there are many whose names we don't know who will carry their misdeeds to their death.

An uplifting message we all should heed.

Ron

Very properly put.

Love ya!

Jane

~Odin~
Life's full basket hoisted upon the
shoulders of experience. Well written poetry.

Lady Mary Ann

Succinct.

so very true and well penned
budd