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The Little Wave That Could

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Having yet to prove Nature is without sensations, awareness, et al, who’s to say our imagination is invalid?

Wednesday, May 29, 2013


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The Little Wave That Could
by Odin Roark

So small
Amid my big brothers
Surfing atop their shoulders
Cresting death with infant life

So many miles
Drifting beside whitecaps
Their splash my recreation
Like the hydrant joys
Captive waters now biding time
Cool young spirits on land

Shamans of the deep
Have shared the future
Preparing me for the day
When caps will be lifted adrift
Free falling to the next
And the next
Until…

The quieter shores
Provide ebb and tide solace
Davy’s Locker stories
Come true

I too can return
So many ways back to the ocean
Through life’s water table
Evaporations to the clouds
Or…

Even the drinking by sentient friends
Affords serendipity
Liquid waste reclamation
A different second chance

After all
Davey tells me
I’m the molecule of life’s continuing story
No real end in sight
How lucky is that?

 


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2013
I volunteer to validate your imagination, Odin. This poem has play -- in title, travel, temperament, and voice. Reading this one is like taking a 'ride' myself, through water and time and journey. I found dual enjoyment of the line: "Their splash my recreation (fun) re-creation (forming over again). "Shamans of the deep" opens a space of heavy wisdom, respect and mystery, while propelling the little wave's "Freefalling to the next/And the next." Creative implement of "A different second chance," which for me defines the 'circuitous' cycle that can allow us all to feel 'lucky.' Playful swish in that last line. I can just imagine all the lips of readers turning into U shapes over that. Thank you, Odin, for the smile. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 29, 2013
Mother Ocean is my life blood...good write...e

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 29, 2013
the ocean does hive us these feelings and so much more
budd


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