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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Remembered Moments

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Needing to give myself a lighter moment, I perused my parent's scrapbooks, finding bittersweet reminders of stories once told that longed to be reminisced.

Wednesday, June 5, 2013


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Remembered Moments
by Odin Roark

As dawn brought first light
Ears perked up
Tails wagged
Dewdrops sparkled
Little fists rubbed eyes open
Jaybirds appeared from nowhere
Copper and green leaves rustled

Weathered hands
Squeezed generous teats
While gentler hands
Prepared water to heat
Coffee to bubble

Fresh cut bread
Laid in waiting
As churned butter
Bided its time

Once bucket-filled
Feline friends lapped
Playful squirts of milk
As family waited

Back then
Mornings ushered in
Day's first remembered moments
Many knew as love's awakening

Back then



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 6, 2013
As a child, just the way you wrote it, times on the farm at my grandparents or other relatives were magical. But then, we didn't have to put in all the hard work that they did to enjoy country living. It's easy to forget how hard it was just to make a living.

Ron

Reviewed by Teresa Walker
Reviewed on June 5, 2013
Oh my goodness this was beautiful! You took me back to a place in time of stored memories, to Grandmother's home. She had her arms opened wide and hugged me till I couldn't breathe. I especially like your expression "love's awakening", when I woke at this home of love, I smelled bacon cooking and singing in the kitchen to an old church song. They are now gone but "Remembered Moments" are with me forever!

Percolators making coffee, an image still in my mind!

Back then ..was the berries!
Teresa


Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 5, 2013
back then we loved more of everything more easily
budd

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on June 5, 2013
~Odin~
Wonderful the moments..thank you for sharing mornings
ushered in..back then.

Lady Mary Ann


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