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Winter Cabin Reality

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We take for granted so many privileges. Here’s some attempted levity on one easy to overlook.

Monday, June 10, 2013


Poem Artwork
Winter Cabin Reality
by Odin Roark

The storm door
Improperly closed
Bangs violently
The clapboard shedding
White paint chips
Wounds without first aid
Flecks of age
Mixing with the drifting snow

Walls shudder with the gusts
Windowpanes rattle their death threat
Should one shatter
Beware flood gates of frozen forever

When will guardians arrive
The stewards of their weary retreat
Providing solace for this place
We so willing endure

Harsh punishment
This loneliness of disuse
The fear of abandonment
Looming
Looming
Always looming

Such anxiety for...
In order...
In order to...
Appease elements restless
Unhappy
Feeling forsaken

The stove sad
Laboring for no one
The refrigerator longing
Waiting like a giant petri dish
Anxious to be opened and examined

Bed covers squirm amidst
Nature's innate seekers of shelter
Six-leggers pass four-leggers in the night
Perplexed
Wondering
Where is everyone?

Field mice
The basements fortress of faith
Anticipate the happy slogging
Of drunken feet above
The excess food celebrated not
Falling through spaces of beamed flooring
Affording reserves for future seasons of need

Thus awaits the wilderness shelter
Determined to remain creative
As temperatures drop even lower
On this little respected life-saver
Multiple-soul make-over haven
Urban's satellite arbiter for sanity

Earnestly it awaits yesterday's loyally
Its generational-visitor relay
Its reason to hold on
Its inducement
To stay whole
Just one more year

Crunching snow outside raises hope
Two mice
Three spiders
One gentle squirrel share
"Got to be more than a bear"



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Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 11, 2013
I need a place to live; I wonder if the two mice, three spiders and the one gentle squirrel would mind sharing...;-) e

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 11, 2013
Love it! The imagery is fantastic of an abandoned cabin waiting for some human occupation once more after being used so much for generations. Reminds me of when my mother visited her childhood home with my brother about 2004. The farmhouse had been abandoned for over 30 years at the time and still contained remembrances from the 1930s when my grandparents owned the farm.

For some reason I got to thinking about an abandoned teepee on the Great Plains. But then, teepees were always taken down and never really abandoned. The thought of living through a winter in North Dakota with only a teepee for shelter makes me shiver to the bone. The plains Native Americans were some tough cookies!

Ron

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 11, 2013
Great poem with wonderful graphics and an ending so perfect that it befits the imagination of the one who wrote it.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 11, 2013
yes light and with humor considering the fate of that which is abandoned most of each year
budd


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