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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Empty Closets

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Discovering inner peace continues to elude the best of intentions.

Tuesday, June 18, 2013


Poem Artwork
Empty Closets
by Odin Roark

How empty the content
Delusion's walk-in closet
Hideaway's glory
Filled to burst

Collected identities
Acquired by proxy
Guarded by duplicity's two-edge sword
Honed by loneliness

Obsessive darkness
Filled with fantasized self-esteem
Like titanium power clubs
Cradled in his and her golf bags
Overcrowding the weekend corner

Opposite nook
Knee-high leather boots and riding crop
Squeezed against stolen lawn jockey statue
Draped with fading award sashes and ribbons

A brittle rose wreath
Once drenched in winner's circle sweat
Now but an ever-withering benchmark
A once decorative memento
For glory's insatiable ego

Such becomes
Yesterday's self-worth
Today's self-loathing
Some day's garage sale
Junk heaps growing

Behind garish symbols of self-deception
Stacked boxes of innocence gathering dust
Memorabilia of childhood
Forgotten memories of broken in mitt
Paper dolls and Eloise dreams
Varsity jacket and autographed pigskin
All honesty's once joyful rewards
Stashed away
Remaining aware
And wondering

In the closet's darkest corner
A stalwart broom stands at the ready
Its gallant sweep-it-away tradition
Remains anxiety's go-to warrior
Merely biding its time
Awaiting the door to open
And...


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Reviewed on July 28, 2013
excellent piece. well, you have to save "that" you might need it! thrifty and not so nifty I guess. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 19, 2013
Another way of stepping out of the closet. What a creative way of expressing all of the hidden garbage we stack away in our minds. Some of us tend to drag them out near the end of our lives trying to seek kinship, and perhaps, forgiveness from what we have in no way all these years.

Bravo, poet!

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 19, 2013
so well presented for us to ponder the real worth of whats in the closet
budd

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2013
I would love to use this as a synthesis piece juxtaposed with some of Fitzgerald's fine prose from The Great Gatsby... there is a thematic constancy that undergirds this fine-feathered friend of a poem... would you be gracious enough to allow me to do this with my 12s.

Roger


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