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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Love's Trial

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

An existential exploration into the indeterminate nature of every romance; acknowledging Lust versus Reality will usually play out before, during and after love has its day.

Wednesday, June 19, 2013


Poem Artwork
Love’s Trial
by Odin Roark

Side-by-side
They travel together
Lust the ever-free spirit
Reality the ever-faithful arbiter

From time to time
Reality’s mediating influence
Becomes smitten as well
It’s only human

Usually during the inevitable deposition of Lust
Where questioning of Love’s visceral weakness
From Reality’s listen-now-or-suffer-later truth factor
Steadfast common sense often renders
Passion’s natural appetite to feel…well…
Unnatural

Inducement’s tactics can be challenging
But as time passes
Love’s back and forth trial of persuasion
Is decided by Patience and Respect
The yin and yang judge of all things lasting

Even as our side-by-side rivals
Continue patrolling Love’s “faithfulness” highway
Often eyeing each other from opposite lanes
But avoiding frivolous confrontation
Love normally holds strong
Avoiding prurient weakness
Protecting its right to remain esteemed

However…

Once in a while
Lust and Reality acquiesce
Accept their humanness and weakness
Join hands
Admit they miss each other
And flirting their way
To the next watering hole
Try to avoid causing
Another “settlement” kind of trial


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Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2013
...am in awe..spot on!
..am saving this one..
Thank you Odin..

Vesna :) ( Croatia)

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on June 23, 2013
~Odin~
Lovely the Antherium waterdrops to acquiesce the love.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
About covered it… The pitfalls of love and lust, from watering hole to burial and so it goes on, like a soap opera that never closes for the season until we do.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
A most thought provoking piece.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
a well written walk through these types of trials
budd

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2013
Recondite, exhilarating and romantic in a cerebral sort of salsa-like sizzling manner... absorbing and refreshingly smut-free foray into the libidoes and don'ts of lustful love stories...

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on June 19, 2013
Interesting, clever, incidental, transcendental, philosophical, abstruse. Damned good.


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