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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Beautiful Intrusions

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Oh how we all want comfort, yet few accept comfort’s natural rules.

Friday, June 28, 2013


Poem Artwork
Beautiful Intrusions
by Odin Roark

How often we revolt
Our space invaded
At times creating panic
Other instances
Gifts realized
Yet momentarily misunderstood

Time knows not the right moment
Time merely measures
Yet we often say
“It was at the wrong time”
This “It” remaining often misconceived

To picture the most intrusive
Is to ask the “big” why
Is to realize
Lessons seldom come
As we choose them

A fly in our food
A Marathon’s exhaustion
A “Dear John” on promotion night
A heart attack at 52
Rendering a family bereaved

Time selects all our finish lines
Yet obstacles remain the challenge
Insipid champagne and notoriety the carrot
Failure the feared evil
Still most accept the thwarting
As providence

Sadly

Encroachment on desire
Seems to many
Contrary to empowerment
Yet to those
Accepting impediment
As lesson’s hindrance
Understanding’s challenge
Resolve’s reward
Intrusions are embraced

For without the obstacle
A finish is without reward
Love
Success
Longevity
The final rest
Might be all for nothing

Perhaps it all means nothing
Without time’s
Beautiful intrusions
 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
Life would be quite boring if the unexpected didn't come along very often and surprise us. We would be surprised, almost equally, between good and bad affects, generally balancing them out, but not always––some people just get the pits. While I have captured a few cherries in my day.

Ron

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
~Odin~
Beautiful instrusions..within to be embraced.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
every thing has a meaning i think
budd

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
This is good advice. Speak also of your mentors, the sources of your inspiration, your related experiences, etc. Too often, when we find ourselves bubbling in values and "revealing truths", we also find ourselves preaching to the choir. To teach by example create some characters, would-be actors in your passion plays. M.True

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on June 28, 2013
Now that is a magnificent train of thought! The best answer yet to that big question - "Why?"
Rx


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