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Baggage

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

In a world that makes war over what a few think life should be, one is faced with the ancient conundrum and perhaps more irony as to what it is all about.

Thursday, July 4, 2013


Poem Artwork
Baggage
by Odin Roark

Liberation once stood up
Opened its eyes
Allowed light to reach parts unknown
And…

Clinging remnants stirred
Aware to awaken
Might hasten inevitable evaporation
Inviting revelation
Seldom welcome

Still

How often this picture potential
This vagabond side
Wrestling local surroundings
Duplicitous people
Where one desperately reaches for the moment
That possible departure
From gasps of fearful need
The challenge to travel over the line
Where becoming the past again
Lurks with voracious appetite

Difficult it is

To continue beyond
Seeking to live as we are
Knowing we’ve the possibility to become
Not as others would have us
But as innate truth might be dictating
Providing earned reward
For hopefully minimal surrender

At such a point
Sufficient pain and suffering
Has made its impact
Readying one for the harvest
Of earned sacrifice
Affording limited
If not easy passage
Across boundaries heretofore prohibited

But

Unlike our feathered ancestors
Or our primate cousins
We often cling to that
Which freer instincts conquer

Ignorant that experience
Needn’t be harnessed
As drag-behind luggage
Our learned need to please
Furtively becomes an invisible habit

Yes

Liberation stands up often
But open eyes remain rare

The fear of light
Like the release from solitary
Or Plato’s cave
Where challenging silhouettes seem safe
Until one steps into searing heat
Proving reality’s shadow-light
Is not to be denied

Yet

When one is ready
Accepting the shaded past
Allows it be left behind as artifice
Knowing its temporary need
Has served its purpose

Ironically
We create rebirth once again
Chasing childlike innocence
Thinking this time
Tomorrow’s regretful baggage
Can be avoided


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 5, 2013
Yes, society is carrying along a lot of baggage that is dragging us down from being more civilized, better. But it is very difficult to leave old habits behind, as you have, so well, expressed.

I find it quite poignant that the elephants are probing the trunk with their trunks. What will we do when all the elephants are gone?

Ron

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on July 4, 2013
Might as well be left behind... a point of reference, this baggage. Where to look, what to see? This is the most confusing aspect of life. Who to teach, who to trust? Experience isn't very good at keeping lesson plans! And even though the game seems to have plenty of rules, it is still just a roll of the dice.


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