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A Tin Cup's Memoir...Kinda

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

The life of many an inanimate deserves more than just ending in a junk heap. (Okay, I know it’s silly, but damn, gotta lighten up once in a while or I’ll snap.)

Sunday, July 7, 2013


Poem Artwork
A Tine Cup’s Memoir…Kinda
by Odin Roark

That be me
Just hangin’
Swinging side to side
Back of a pack
My buddies
The sleep roll and anorak

That be me
Ancient history
From a great grand dad
To a grandson extraordinaire
Continuin’ this long bumpy ride

Forged in New Hampshire
Turn of the 20th
Makin’ it through one war
Sitting out the next
Bouncin’ through 14 Appalachian peaks
4 American deserts
2 Bankruptcies
1 marriage
(guess who got the cup)
And now
I’m lookin’ forward to
Restin’ my centenarian can
Next to a Boy Scout campfire
Grandson style

Damn
I’m old

Been shot at
Sand washed
Brillow shined
And water nourished

Been cooked with
Drunk with
Souped with
Coffee and bourboned with

Shared leftovers with
Spiders
Scorpions
Bear cubs
And lizards

Been spooned with
Forked
Fingered
And knifed with

Even survived domestic violence
Pitched from 2nd story it was
Soft grass it wasn’t
Concrete banged me a scar
Grandson used as braggin’ rights
Grandpa’s battle scars
He called it

Yet

Almost had to suck it up
Got to the garage sale stage
Goin’ price if I’d been picked
Maybe a nickel
But grandson’s smart
“They don’t make ‘em like this anymore,” says he.
“Not for sale”

Phew!

So…

Got myself a front-row seat
With the Grandson
Watchin’ them bargain hunters
Figurin’
Bickerin’
Negotiatin’

Ya know
Can’t complain
Not bad
Bein’ on in years
Knowin’ you’re still good for a few more
Long as grandson keeps hikin’
Gets a girl friend
Gets married
Creates another generation of bangin’ ‘round

Might do me in?

Naw

Don’t make ‘em like me anymore
Right?





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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
A keen mind for the simple importance of things well made and with a laudable history. Story well told. I especially like the first person perspective. M.True

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
~Odin~
Awesome..rich in a Tin Cup's centurian stories to marvel.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
... whew! whether that cup mugged for the picture or not, you've managed to pen a voluminous biographical verse to round out a mighty fine back story, here, Odin; but judging from the rich repast you've written to repay your readers, I would venture to guess this cup is only half full... is there a sequel in there somewhere? Regardless, this cup-full has been memorable! ... a rim reminder of days gone by... (you can stop groaning now ;)

Looking forward to the next one.

Roger

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
I love it! One of your most coherent offerings. One man's junk is another man's treasure. From my youth, I remember those old, chipped survivors of porcelain covered metal that served yeoman duty during the first half of the twentieth century only to be discarded in favor of the wonder of modern life––plastics!

At first I thought you were talking about the homeless again. many of those old tin cups ended up in their last job, collecting pennies on the street––dollars were, oh, so sweet.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
Right.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 7, 2013
Odin,

This is outstanding. That little cup has sure traveled and no, it isn't done yet! I enjoyed this journey of the cup and I especially liked the ending. GREAT write!

Many blessings,
Linda+


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