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· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

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· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

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Living the Nightmare

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Many would argue the spirit of man has been so abused, that distinction between the sub-conscious perception and the conscious is destined to remain a blur.

Friday, July 12, 2013


Poem Artwork
Living The Nightmare
by Odin Roark

Awake in a nightmare
He leaves scratches
Atop the licorice ribbon
His winding street
Through utopian cotton candy
Blowing in the wind
Once of gale force
A temper now but a breeze

His sack of intangible gold dust
Best sprinkled along dreamer’s highway
Through the burial grounds
Of hearts left pumping airless wonder
While white bones aka jazz sticks
Tumble rhythms across
Weeded skins stretched taut
Joining deserts come alive
With blooming orchids now drenched
In sweet lather of well chewed delusions

How rich this person of interest
Ready not for judgment’s road kill
Even as heavenly vultures bemoan
While fireflies emblazon life’s levitation
Along the trail left behind
Inviting guilt to whirl dervishly
Into emotions of joyful release

How fortunate the enigma

Graveyards of living continue
Where pious mountainous gestures
Stillborn by self-righteousness
Cartwheel their legless forms
With the glee of sophistry
Knowing so well
What can never be known

Such is puzzled innocence awakened
Once wrapped ugly by confessional tears
 


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Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on July 13, 2013
Beauty in dark experience, does not tangle the mind as some poems do, this leads you on because of the powerful expressions! just carry on the journey Odin, expressions of grandeur like 'into emotions of joyful release' comes out only once. just continue and you will reach somewhere!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 13, 2013
Except for your description, I wouldn't have a clue what you are writing about. Since we have involved in a very abusive world where it is basically dog eat dog, that is hardwired into our sub brain and subconscious. The problem is trying to overcome these primal urges with our conscience brain. In the dream state, there is often a battle between the two. Hopefully, a good poem or story is then revealed.

Ron

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on July 13, 2013

Dark experiences captured in a poetic song. Well done!
May more light shine and clarity come soon.


Peace, Love and Abundant Blessings,

John Michael Domino

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on July 12, 2013
This is a powerful vision, a thematic diorama to your persona, I am guessing. The rudeness of reality may be like spilt milk, but some may still lament the loss. All is not darkness, and as you note, "fireflies emblazon life’s levitation". Man was born to rise above the dust, if only to remark the beauty of the stars. M.True


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