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Unless...

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It’s difficult to recall the unnoticed.

Saturday, August 10, 2013


Poem Artwork
Unless…
by Odin Roark

Seems just yesterday the sun arced
Over precarious ice
The street’s one elm
Leaned its naked branches with the wind Bringing winter’s announcement

A Coney Island cat crouched puzzled
Gradual crusting snow layering
The boardwalk a ribbon of white awaiting the gray
Mister Cat sprung back into dumpster heaven
Closed his eyes
And returned to his lone-bird dream
The one always disappearing
Over horizon’s edge

A few blocks away
Anxious hormones kept rebellious teens
Of mere rip-torn jeans and NFL jerseys
Rubbing their friction memories
Into goose-bumped skin

Frozen leaves scurried left and right
Separated from their bark insulated origin
The once virile tree sap
Now but a cryonic life flow
Awaiting spring’s resurrection

Somewhere
A corner-park’s snowman
Bowed forgiveness to the stinging wind
Its shivering cold prepared girth and pride
For tomorrow’s collapse

Beneath Time’s Square lights
Heavy metal leapt from SUV windows
Igniting crystal air
Into a vortex of tribal dance sensations
Vibrations warming all in its path

Yesterday’s season-change
Like a surprise party
Thrown on a whim
Roared through the city’s trenches
Beneath skyscraper walls of protection
As if birthing another Also Sprach Zarathustra
Daring frozen tears to fall

Central Park’s tree branches
Clustered and embraced each other
Like mouths searching for lips of warmth
While a lone photographer
Adorned in raccoon coat
Pointed her camera at breathing drifts
Becoming icing for fantasy’s deep freeze cake

At city’s center
Twisting cables of struggling semaphores
Blinked for mercy
As the insistent primal howl echoed
Across pot holed roadways
And iron slabs of street repair
Above underground steel tracks
Awaiting metro’s ignited contact

As dawn broke

Veined tunnels continued swallowing
The rushing energy astride quickened steps
Running feet
Shoving elbows and shoulders

City dweller anxiety
Cascaded down entrance stairwells
Boarded subway cars
Merged into the city’s synaptic darkness
And awaited their stop
Most likely yet another insulated destination
Where nature happening
Might once again go unnoticed
Never to be recalled
Unless…

  


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Reviewed on August 12, 2013
the visuals in this are dynamite! I will have to read this a few times.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 11, 2013
I really enjoyed the detailed descriptions of winter's events from your memory of them not so long ago. That's what I miss about this place, the sharp changing of the seasons.

I did catch the idea that for those in the commuter rush, the seasons mean little difference as they mob the subway every day going about their business as though the weather wasn't there and sadly miss the images that you carefully captured for immortality.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 11, 2013
You've made me recall last winter and think about the winter soon to come. Now I've got a chill.

Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on August 10, 2013
A brilliant write Odin. I enjoyed the contrast of the sleeping cat and frozen cityscape with the break of and stuttering life of the day just beginning and building till all is an unnoticed blur of life and movement. No one notices the small things in a sea of movement. The small moments of life in a blur of life. Greatly enjoyed the read. Bob

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on August 10, 2013
The setting of the stage. A wonderful glint of city through frosty windows. Superb imagery! M.True


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