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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Relay

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Some find finish lines final. Others choose to see them as further starts.

Thursday, September 19, 2013


Poem Artwork
Relay
by Odin Roark

Quietly restless vibrates their lives
Refusing to become another’s exhaustion

With feet that still move
Arms that forever embrace
Smiles that only invite
Thinking that feeds dreams
Their midnight oil remains burning

So go the resilient few
Bodily disintegration ignored
Their stamina relentless
Minds and hearts held fervent
Even as so few relate
Most collapsing beneath dimming flame

When the finish line appears
Champions of tenacity find the baton levitating
Shadowy runners refusing evanescence
Enjoining instead others unyielding

Still…

All must cross pragmatic finish lines
Exit stadium’s forgetful tunnels
Accept this life’s form of play

For some

Around unknown corners few wish to chance
Breathing continues restless
As transition invites pause
For new breath to be caught


 


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 2, 2014

well done


Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 20, 2013
take every breath we can as the race goes on
budd

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 19, 2013
I'm with Michael. Life throws a relay to everyone. It starts when we are born and our parents must pass on to us what we will pass on to others until we have to leave the race––just like you said. Beautiful.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on September 19, 2013
Aspiration and tenacity, the sustenance of legendary men and women. And by way of contrast, those found lacking are destined to be tomorrow's spectators. Impressive write and insight. Powerful opening lines. M.True


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