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Awakening the Dream

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For those made weary by life’s noise, dreams often feel like the go-to reality.

Sunday, September 29, 2013


Poem Artwork
Awakening the Dream
by Odin Roark

Even in a dream
A poet’s page
Starts blank

Restlessly
The inscrutable pen hovers
Awareness preparing absorption
Like a dry valley of nature
Awaiting tributaries to ripple convergence
A lake to be
Remaining patient

Unaddressed questions resurface
Even as pebbles hamper flow once again
Rocks demand navigation
And boulders bent on containment
Concede the rush into reservoirs

Expression’s pause
Ellipsis of control
Fails holding back the surge of ink to paper
As grammar’s first trickle bodes further volume

Restless verbs urge images forward
A tide of willingness waits
Wanting complete its existence

Around mind’s shoreline
Animation commences cautiously
Needing to quench
Parched wanderings
Staying ever mindful
Poisoning is often invisible

Unexpectedly

This once empty page
Experiences a downpour
Cooling passion’s vacillating temperatures
Into pastels of emotion
Urging hard layered resistance
Into malleable thought

Pauses and stops
Commas and periods
Paragraphs of reason and compassion
Flow freely
Like spillways of a dam

For some
The purge of resolve
Often disappoints

How delicate such a dream
Excruciating at times
Often revealing once invisible sentences
To correct lingering mistakes

Awakening retains echoes
The waning past remaining familiar
Like battlefields of regret
Unpunctuated sentences
Forever fragments of one’s war

Such a dream’s ending
Always makes known
The expectant pen
Forever willing to just be held
Demanding nothing
Merely to remain
A trusted friend
Knowing at times…
It is the only friend




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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2013
I like this reveal very much. It leaves me believing you know the worth of a fountain pen, and I am thinking you often (or usually)write with a pen. You have painted the gloriousness of hand writing. I enjoyed, "Often revealing once invisible sentences/To correct lingering mistakes." ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 30, 2013
I can't say I understood it all, but I was mightily impressed by what I did understand. I had a dream last night that came out of nowhere. Like many dreams it was hard to dislodge and move on to other things. Where that dream came from I don't know.

I guess you are saying that once a pen hits the paper, anything can come out, and sometimes it can be quite surprising. On the other hand, I can't put pen to paper anymore, but can spew this stream of consciousness directly via my voice into electronic data making up words on electronic paper.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 30, 2013
Love the pic and the last stanza.

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on September 29, 2013
It is so much about the pooling of intentions, spilling guts with such exquisite expression. The flow of things as natural as Bhuddist rock gardens and butterflies on bumpers being not quite so beautiful. It's all about the imaginings of the hand with the pen and the quicker eye. Wonderful words to write by… M.True

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 29, 2013
Yep, lonely is the writer's life more times than not and the pen, i.e., keyboard is the only tangible thing in his life. The act of composing thoughtful and deep philosophical word to share with the world is meaning enough for the writer's existence.


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