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Tabled Destiny

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For some of us, spiritual rallies are but inept attempts to perpetuate the same ol’, reminding us once again of the other “What if?"

Monday, October 14, 2013


Poem Artwork
Tabled Destiny
by Odin Roark

Life's tsunami starts way back
the shifting tectonics of time
re-form yet another evolution
one's bargained death wish in disguise

Most know not
when disturbance begins
when spilled milk begins to teach
when failure trumpets wisdom

From cradle to grave
we're taught
you can't have that
preschool
elementary
middle
high
higher
ahhh
the onion skin admission ticket

PERFECT JOB

Do this
Have that
Eight hour work day
No
Twelve hour work day
Yes
Be reasonable
No
Shark-infest your waters
Yes
Earn your bonus
No
Scheme your advance
Yes
Retire with honor
No
Cash in beating the system
Yes

PERFECT RELATIONSHIP

Honest background
No
Fabricated heredity
Yes
Thinking
No
Status quo
Yes
Intelligence used
No
Entitlement expected
Yes
Quiet and focused
No
Loud and scattered
Yes
Enjoined
No
Divorced
Yes

ONE DAY

The next random shift erupts
innate calendars run asunder
you're finally free
no more corralling of instinct
no more downside to curiosity
no more programs to die by

INFINITY CALLS

Shackles fall free
unhappiness exits
flames cleanse bodily disease
smoke and cloud transport molecules of ecstasy
to form anew

NEXT STOP

Catching the first breeze to nowhere
to everywhere
to schedules unknown
to existence sans time

Where chance be not tabled
where worth be not an issue
and day and night be one
with all that
was
is
and will ever be

WELCOME HOME  


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Reviewed on October 14, 2013
"We" have to put food on the table. That table like a lazy Susan keeps spinning and it's tough to grab what you need . The proverbial merry-go-round of coulda woulda shoulda. And damn it I didn't! This poem seems to ask why is it so hard to accept happiness?

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on October 14, 2013
Sounds like a bid for retirement if I ever heard one. It is so much easier to see the past chaos with feet up and a cold beer in paradise. M.True

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on October 14, 2013
really a superb work with artistic flair

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2013
Potent Irony
Inevitably
Pundit-worthy
Always
Probative
In spades
Engaging
As if on bended knee
Humble and oh so profound
A regular Ghandi
Valhalla-bound
Just like an Odin (to mingle diurnal rounds with a glimpse at a day in the life with the deities whose designs determine our destinies...

I like how you have your way with the mundane and the metaphysical, blending them seamlessly as form meets 'fun'ction... fun stuff!

Roger



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