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Climber

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A climber’s heart and mind is seldom understood, except by other climbers.

Tuesday, November 26, 2013


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Climber
by Odin Roark

Reality readied its chance

Ascent of an alpine face
Traversing ice and cold
Challenging steel axe and rope
Such was the pulsating vibration
Facing another dawn

That day
Blade and ice danced slow motion
Penetrating deep into resistance
Echoing through layered centuries
Awakening nature to its presence

Breath became reserved
High altitude remained merciless
Snow-blind eyes squinted thankfully
As yards became feet
Became inches
Became respect for the unknown

Frozen feet
Cinched tight inside
Defiant crampons
Numbly impelled their serrated spikes

The blue iced chorus groaned displeasure
Reminding auger-encroachment
Frozen time was forever resilient

Destiny prevailed

Mortality hung suspended
As will over apathy
Courage over defeat
Found fear had been conquered

Life’s architecture
Like da Vinci ’s Vitruvian Man
Became a frozen tapestry
Life’s proportions
Past
Future
Present
Coalesced
Transformed
Became…

Some might say such a tale
Mere envisages
Penned into a journal
To bide some time

This night however…

The mountain-wall’s next attempt
Huddled in a tent weathering sub-zero temperatures
Sipped tea from his father’s battered cup
A legacy found long ago
Floating atop glacial runoff

Through the night
Ink continued flowing
Tin cup foreshadowing remained warm
First light neared
  


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on November 27, 2013
Although you have us seeing through the eyes of an extreme athlete I will never fathom the true desire to tease death in such a way, time and time again, and for the sake of what? I did some free climbing back in the day only to be able to see the world from the top. The "Fool on the Hill" comes to mind. M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 27, 2013
The photo defies description. However, the poem describes the climber very well. Onward and upward, for there is no turning back.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 27, 2013
Analytical, visceral. A tale told with dazzling insights.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on November 26, 2013
Well done!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 26, 2013
you have captured the thought here perfectly
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 26, 2013
Oh, you are so right about what the climber has in his heart and thoughts; to those of us who are not climbers will never be able to conceive. Don't know if you climb, Odin, but whether you do or not means nothing, for you climbed inside a climber's mind with this poem. Excellent!


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