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Not Yet

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For many of us, today’s innocence of childhood is but ancient history. Some would argue adults are flagrantly shortsighted in a duty to prepare them for history’s repetition. All we can count on are new costumes and new actors replaying the same characters.

Monday, December 2, 2013


Poem Artwork
Not Yet
by Odin Roark

Fall
As symbol of change
Keeps coming earlier of late
From green to bright orange
To smoldering gray
The spirit’s defoliation is quick
Napalm unnecessary
The new century firebombing
Showcasing Syria or Pakistan
Insidious and stealth
Needs little to ignite

But children don’t know that
Not yet

It’s easy to think
The world was born old
Time doesn’t know any better
It’s always been old
Like a pawn shop of layered history
Prized conquests periodically
Are taken down from a shelf
Dusted off
Principal and interest paid
Taken ‘round the block
Promptly displayed
Upon another shelf
Gathers dust
Until
Time to replay
Pawn today
To forestall tomorrow
Repeating the ritual
Making possible the next
Piece of history
Repeating itself
Old getting older
So it goes

But children don’t know that
Not yet

Once in a while
Fall comes and goes
As history meant it
Nature tries to tell us
The life of a leaf
Turns from summer green
To streaks of yellow and red
Flame orange slipping in naturally
Trying to remind us
The biding of time
The patience of process
The natural evolution of time
Asks little
But we ignore such wisdom

Even children don’t know that
Not yet

What they do know
Is that leaves fall to the ground
Daddy and mommy rake them up
Like so many dead things
So much burning-in-waiting
Piled high for another memory
Lit to flame
Inviting children
To run around the fire
Their yells and screams of joy
And innocence
Betrayed by demonic faces forming
Mirrored in the fire

But the children don’t see that
Not yet

Like life’s fire
The world ages
Many ashes burn
To a different kind of pawn-dust

Still

Ultimately
The layered lessons
Whether on the chosen battlefield
Or atop that banjo in the pawn shop
Like chickens one can’t tell apart
Everything comes home to roost
Sometimes coating time-remembered shelves
Sometimes remaining just identity’s mulch
Nurturing tomorrow’s momentary reprieve
Awaiting the next harvest
History’s ignorance repeating itself
Tomorrow
And probably…

The next day

But the children don’t know that
Not yet



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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on December 4, 2013
So many ways to rearrange the playing field.
Perhaps to isolate, to insulate,
To nurture without exposure to PG anything,
Tucking chicks beneath momma's impenetrable wings.
It is the cursed who feel no remorse,
Throwing their children to the hungry wolves.
And the obvious reason the wolves come round again. M.True

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on December 3, 2013
Perfect for this (and any) season of death and rebirth - somehow it doesn't seem so bleak when you say it. Maybe it is the 'reprieve' and possibility that the children will stumble upon an evolutionary new path. Happy New Year! Jan

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 3, 2013
So poignant and true. Innocence is wonderful, but independence is bliss. I recall never believing in Santa Claus only as a comic book like character. I learned what hot and cold was by putting my hand in the fire and in the ice water. I left innocence before I was 10 and have always found history to be my teacher and my elders as my guide. Innocence has its place, but the sooner children leave that innocence behind, the better.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 3, 2013
so much here is intertwined into your well penned write it should be read over and contemplated
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on December 3, 2013
You have pieced together the timelines of life and death and n'er the twain shall meet. Hardcore reality.

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on December 2, 2013
Love the whole ambience of this starkly expressed pocket of truth.
Rx

Like Edward's response too :o)

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on December 2, 2013
And when the fog lifts
and they get a glimpse of what lies beyond the moment
will they be too old, too tired, too apathetic
to nudge the course of history?
We don't know that.


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