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Life's Aperture

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Whether we like it or not, our extraterrestrial friends must be thinking we are a pathetic species.

Saturday, December 14, 2013


Poem Artwork
Life’s Aperture
by Odin Roark

Notice the light
Or lack thereof
How the details
Falter in shadow
But imprint in light

Naiveté thinking suggests
We can control light’s fundamental purpose
To assist our awakened perception

So why…

White/reds or shoot-ups
To leapfrog over natural time
Denigrating nature’s recharge

Yet

Oh how we think we know better
Pop a pill for this
Another for that
Pound our mood with her
Deflate our mood with him
On and on the quest to escape

Once

There was simplicity of understanding
When the sun came up
We did what we needed to do to survive that day
When the sun went down
We relaxed our weary bodies
Found simple comforts
Food
Drink
Sex
Sleep

Now

That perceptive opening
Our aperture of freedom
Is being coerced
Tempting self-sabotage

Dimness informs
Alerting deprivation
Presenting discovery’s
Illumination/Darkness

Might it be…

The yin and yang of lessons
One’s open and closed eyes
Has been reduced to manufactured
Mind games
Biological influences
Supernatural brainwashing
Infiltrating our sentient power
With imprisonment

Dreaming can’t flip a switch for enlightenment
Nor find solace in darkness
For light is light
Dark is dark
Each dependent on the other
As couplet perfection

To think about that
Is to wonder what higher cosmic intelligence
Would do with our evasion

Perhaps

It’s time to ask
Not what our brain can do for us
But what we can do for our brain

Ironically for some

There’s always Florida’s Mega Money jackpot





   


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Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on December 15, 2013
I'm having to read this over and over again. I can visualize it, but can't articulate what I see.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 15, 2013
the ironic nature of what might and might not be is apparent in your well written words
budd

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on December 15, 2013
Time, the thief of all things. Once we figured out how to burn the candle at both ends, the natural balance was lost forever. But aliens tend to see ants, I would think, assuming that our seemingly random patterns must represent some necessary logic. And, as with ants, unless they get into your kitchen or spoil your picnic, they are most likely forgotten. M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 15, 2013
I disagree with Jerry, as usual. He apparently doesn't know what it takes to travel between the stars. He must believe all the science fiction out there saying that it takes a gross multiplication of our violent predatory nature instead of lessons learned the hard way.

Once again, you've summed up our malaise very well. One reading your poem 100 years from now will smile at the irony. By then, we should have a good plan, if not a pathway to meeting our counterparts in the stellar realm… That is, if we are up to it by then.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on December 15, 2013
Hah! I still play the Powerball and lottery. Can't quit now. The theme of this poem is our inept search for control, or mind over matter, or looking for an easy way out. About the extraterrestrials. What makes anyone think they are anymore intelligent or self assured as we are?

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2013
Since when did out of control drug use constitute a quest for control? There are some things in this drama that won't wash... but still and all, the swipe at the 'decadense' at the close is a nice touch of irony...


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