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Lemmings' Cliff Run

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Ah, the lure of “after Christmas” sales reminding even the most brazen, one can tread water just so long.

Thursday, December 26, 2013


Poem Artwork
Lemmings’ Cliff Run
by Odin Roark

Might it be

We are naively gullible
Believing like the Lemmings
From the ocean-cliff’s edge
Down below looks like a lake
So it must be a lake
Even though our species
Should know better

Could it be

We abandon
Those extra synaptic gifts
Deceive ourselves
Take the leap
Find we can survive the jump
But the endless “lake”
Like to the lemmings
Has no opposite shoreline
Within eyesight

And like the lemmings
Struggle concedes to
Physical and mental fatigue
Delivers exhausted neurons
Into blissful compliance

Such might be

The place where
Credit card inebriation
Staggers us into the “lake”
Only to find we’ve extended
Beyond our means
No shoreline in view

Sadly

Many might survive their “ocean”
Until they are but floating bodies
Bobbing with the waves of commerce know-how
As it pushes the tide
Back to the shore
Ready to lure
Fresh
Delusional
Lemming-headed targets
Awaiting atop cliff’s edge
Staring into that intoxicating money-colored
Blue/green color we’ve grown to glamorize
Fantasize
And worship
Thinking it will always be there
Until it's not

Nature’s perfection
Transparency’s metaphor
Seldom perceived
Often ignored


    


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Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 28, 2013
Lemming-headed targets
Awaiting atop cliff’s edge
Fantasizing
And worshiping

So sadly true these days, not only by the money hungry corporations, but also by the pompous 'I'm here to help you' politicians.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 27, 2013
It seems that some people can't get out of the "shopping" mode thinking they're getting "bargains" for next year's yard sale and finding those 0% credit card offers to intriguing not to take and overspend just because "a bird in hand is so much better than seeing that "find" in a neighbor's hand first.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on December 27, 2013
I agree one hundred percent, Odin.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 27, 2013
Lemmings and headless chickens - the coop is a pressure-cooker in which we're all cooked unless we take a positive leap in the opposite direction. But our material world economics are geared such that consumerism is both the cause and effect of perceived success, sadly. How long does it take to learn that the pursuit of acquisition of goods doesn't lead to more satisfaction but to less? May your New Year be spent acquiring yet more spiritual and effectual gifts of wisdom, peace and joy in real life, my friend. xx

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 27, 2013
it is just crazy
budd

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on December 26, 2013
When folks start complaining how expensive Wal-Mart is, you know the trickle-down has worn out its welcome. Let's hope the lemmings get fitted with glasses this year and the era of "unlimited funds" returns to the actual counting of coins. M.True


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