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Beyond the Face

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

How better to start the New Year than to reflect on the often hidden lessons? Of course, some will still have plastic surgery consultations tomorrow.

Wednesday, January 1, 2014


Poem Artwork
Beyond the Face
by Odin Roark

How often we ponder
The portrait of life
Some without a face
Some with but war as a canvas

Such a face

Reveals folds above eyes
Disengaged as a draught-laden wilderness
Yet reliable as an infrequent desert storm

For amidst nature’s wisdom
Directional signs are forever available
Even though some may be
Subtle and wanting to hide
Still
Few pay attention

Perfection makes no judgment

Even as history is difficult to cover up
When presented by a face
That has obviously seen
More than most of us
Can dream of

Archiving such potential realities
Begs the opening of discovery
Often challenging one’s patience
The forever-our-partner in waiting
Smiling back sagacity so anxious
Wanting only to be part of our own smile

The face

What was
What is
What might attract
Veracious seekers of life
Accepting their journey
As the worth of engaging years
Infused with honesty
Allowing chiseled sculpture
To live forever in the eye’s mind
Of those who might also
Wish to perceive beyond the face

Projecting the wonder
Life
Peace
Waiting for the next iteration
Remains a journal of the spirit
Some will fortunately
Embrace with understanding
Knowing weathered skin
Is but captured wind and weather
Mind and soul
Body and suffering
Wanting only to remain
Without airbrush deceit
As is
As was
As will always be

While others

Will address
One’s life map of travels
With fearful retreat
Wanting still the shadows of delusion


   


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Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on January 3, 2014
Agree with Jansen, reminded me of the exact same song. Believe these are the lyrics they were thinking of:
"All of these lines across my face
Tell you the story of who I am
So many stories of where I've been
And how I got to where I am
But these stories don't mean anything
When you've got no one to tell them to..."

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 2, 2014
Every line tells a story, yet we live in an age which seemingly rates the flawless and faultless received stereotype above the outworkings in the body of the experienced life and soul. I would count it a privilege and a blessing to be able to weather the years this person undoubtedly has. An admirable New Year meditation, Odin. xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 2, 2014
To be able to decipher the many lines in an old face would be tantamount to reading cards or compiling a seance, although it would far outdistance itself from those two. THAT face has many tales within its life experience which have not one wit to do with DNA.

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on January 2, 2014
So interesting that I discover this and Brandi Carlyle's song "Story" within a day or so of each other. Both spark simultaneous tears and chills. Or maybe it is only my age and the new beginning. Thanks again, Odin.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 2, 2014
the perfect blend of magnificently chosen words to pain t an emotion to accompany the picture cuopled with the words here
budd

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on January 1, 2014
As a neophyte to poetry, I went back and read Shakespeare's 18th sonnet, and Byron's “She walks in beauty like the night” as a frame of reference. Byron stole the show with his youthful exuberance for a lovely face. He appears to have been smitten by the prospect of love, whereas Shakespeare appears to have been in love with his own words. In contrast to both, yours is a tribute to inner beauty and to wisdom. You create a much deeper portrait for contemplation—the honesty that can be found beyond the weathered features of a face--if only we dare try to see it. I like all three. Vive la difference!

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on January 1, 2014
A beautiful homage to the human face.
Masks have always had an element of power, instilled, in part by the deception. And when we found the skill to carve the face, this too was done, as per the making of some justifiable correction. In either case, the features, the facts, the fear of age, the wrinkles or the scars, each cut moves us closer to illusion and gives us the means not to have to face the face we really are. M.True


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