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Cast Iron Prison

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There’s much to be learned from cartoons, but then there comes the time to move on.

Saturday, January 4, 2014


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Cast Iron Prison
by Odin Roark

A cartoon mouse knows of its power
A child knows its weight
The cast-iron skillet knows it’s impervious
But beyond such masquerading realities
Adults often adopt such fantasy as metaphor
Wallowing in its emblematic captivity

Yet

Some understand
Survival transcends acquiescence
And like all endurance
Awareness dictates
It’s not easy avoiding being chased
Not easy stepping through
Iteration’s next threshold
Where new knows not old

And the fortunate comprehend

Those who accept themselves as
Impervious atoms of existence
Destined like history’s cast-iron skillet
To never vanish
But merely to evolve into new forms
Realize ignoring perpetuity
Is to stay a prisoner

Of course

There will always be others
Forever replaying their personal cartoon
Unaware the universe
Eventually tires
Of the same ol’
And does what it does best…

 


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Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on January 5, 2014
Makes me think of this, "The only path to knowing God is through the study of Science and for that reason the Bible opens with a description of the creation." - Maimoniedes "Guide for the Perplexed"

Reviewed on January 5, 2014
i'm not sure anyone or thing tires of love, maybe that is the only thing that truly stays, of which we clearly have not evolved into.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 5, 2014
Perhaps we need to have a true grasp on where we have come from in order to successfully negotiate moving on and evolving, Odin. We are perhaps successfully blinkered by the perpetual arrogance of the present in which we can laugh at cartoons because we assume, in the light of current 'knowledge', they are ridiculous and also deny the power of a 'different' future because we have not learned from or paid heed to the relevance of our past. Thank you for always making me think and contemplate. xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 4, 2014
I appreciate the philosophical perspective that you have shared through your verses here, Odin. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on January 4, 2014
Scientific estimates of the 7 variables in Drakes Equation puts the number of planets capable of supporting life much like Earth at between 200 and 500 billion. If true, there are probably a large number of them that are far more advanced than us--those who have learned how to live without killing each other to extinction. Therefore, with generous guesses, and favorable hunches, and a lot of luck there is a glimmer of hope for us...

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on January 4, 2014
It has always puzzled me how, when a cartoon character is hit in the face by a skillet, the skillet is dented in the shape of the face as if that fiction is somehow laughable. Children will laugh at the ludicrous images adults bring into their world. Seldom, however, do they understand the implications. If you are injured or die (in a video game or in a cartoon), all you have to do is hit the reset button, right? The sound and fury of mindless aggression to instill... I was never too keen on the three stooges either. M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 4, 2014
Once again you have escaped me after I thought of Ratatouille and that didn't fit, as well as the image of the cartoon girl hitting a cartoon mouse with a cartoon cast iron skillet. Now that reminds me of my woman in the kitchen!

I will try not to be captive in a cartoon environment.

Ron's

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 4, 2014
i really like how you have expresssed this one
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 4, 2014
It tunes out with a big bang, is what I believe the universe does, Odin. "Survival transcends acquiescence." You had better believe it does, at least for those who deal with both and understands them both.


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