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I Do

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

From one romantic to another, in today’s world, more than ever, lovers beware.

Sunday, January 12, 2014


Poem Artwork
“I do”
by Odin Roark

Unlike the sea anemone
Occasionally attached to the back of a crab
Such being a mutual agreement
“Just along for the ride”

People bonding today
Challenge the word
Bringing new meaning
To the relation-ship

Some set sail on smooth waters
While most eventually find one perfect storm
After another

And

Like the sea anemone
The coup de grâce
Comes without warning
Usually synchronous
With the furtive look
Of a challenger
Offering new transport

After all

Today
Male and female coupling
Marriage license
Or not
Means journeying together
Until the floor of travel
Becomes gravelly
Becomes rutted
Becomes muddy
And…

Well…

Difficult

Something might have been wrong
With one’s picture in the beginning
But lovers hate admitting that
You know
After all
Insecure humans love the “forever” idea
Right?

The “I do” needs modifying

How about “I’ll try”
Which at least will suggest
Once and for all
Nothing is a blessed-forever
And prove honesty isn’t always
The best policy
Unless…

Oh
Such a Hitchcockian thought

“Life insurance
Anyone?”
   


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Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on January 14, 2014
my opinion, the "I'Do's" don't need to be changed to "I"ll Try". What? The woman is gonna "try not spend all the money on shopping". Or a man is gonna "Try" to keep his pants on. Cause the "I'll Try Better Next Time", doesn't work for me, you don't have to try to do better, you just do it. To me "I'll Try" is just an excuse. You either do it or you don't. there is not an in between when it comes to right and wrong. people should have enough sense to know whether or not they love the person soul/mind first before loving/lusting the body before they get married. And once you say "I Do", you've made a commitment, then that love sometimes becomes a choice. And hey you may just have to forgive the bastard each and every day, because obviously you can't forget, because your not doing the "I'll Try", your sticking to the "I Do".

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 13, 2014
This poem is filled with wonderful insight into human behavior. I like the notion of "I'll try" and the ridiculous attempt at a eternity offered by all the vows religious ritual pomp and pageantry associated with coupling for life when life and people change.



Simple psychology suggests that man and woman were made to make children from attraction that is often very opposite and therefore, destructive. Mates who are likely to stick together have the same interests and personality and are therefore, quite boring and likely to produce equally boring offspring.



Such is life, and you are so apt at describing it.



Ron

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on January 12, 2014
I have been married twice due to being widowed the first time. Both times I would have given my all for my marriage ...but the second time I married a womaniser and he ran off with one half my age. Consequently, I don't think marriage is for everyone.

typo
And prove hones[tly] isn’t always

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on January 12, 2014
I would share my take on the institution of marriage but that might take another five easy pieces. It is, as you suggest, woefully out of date and based on no real exchange of property or goods. (With the possible exception of the gold diggers vision.) A tattoo has a better chance of making it to death's parting. M.True

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 12, 2014
Hah! Since I have been married three times, and should have never married the first two time, I relate BIG time to this poem, Odin. In my experiences, which had a wicked monster hiding within my id, I find, looking back, that I was searching for a reason to "ship" out the first two times almost as soon as I said, I'll Try . . . er . . . I Do. I think the need to look for a reason to leave the marriage vows is alive and well these days as they were in my experiences.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 12, 2014
much to ponder in this analogy
budd


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