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Surviving Ourselves

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A prose-poetry exploration with the idea that in the realm of punishment, no one, no outside force, does the job we do to ourselves. And…maybe that’s a good thing.

Tuesday, January 21, 2014


Poem Artwork
Surviving Ourselves
by Odin Roark

Blame game trollops
Cruise our insides
Willing to plant more guilt
Defying accountability
To take a stand

Conscience-bots
Perform recon
Patrolling vulnerabilities
Knowing no man’s land
Between heart and mind
Have always
Will always
Be pregnable passage

Yet

The front lines of the heart
Grasp one’s dug in fortification
Mind’s fortress of strength
Is forever monitoring

Why then
Knowing we create our own reality
Do we need such skirmishes
Such oft times escalated guilt trips
That do nothing
But undermine life’s victory?

Might it be…

We refuse to accept
The “out there” version
That much touted
Societal mirage
Promoting illusion over truth

Perchance
We are stuck
Forever creating
Our trial and error reality
For fear
Of succumbing to elitist delusion

And if we’ve created
Conscience-bots
And blame game trollops
Aren’t we better armed?

Don’t personally created battle fields
Serve to strategize
To outmaneuver those
Who would have us self-destruct
Their way?

Perhaps our self-imposed reality
Doesn’t make the societal mirage any easier
But at least it doesn’t abandon
Growing consciousness for
Surviving ourselves



 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 22, 2014
Once again, you have struck a chord that so many face. I am thinking of Portnoy's Complaint and all the other psychological dramas "the flesh is heir to." Fortunately, and thank goodness, I don't have those problems and pretty much like myself.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 22, 2014
Society revolves around itself and recreates the past in many different ways. So are we too in the forever process of recreating. Okay. Therefore is it societies' problem which presents to us obstacles we are ill prepared for, therefore we respond in the honored defensive way and close it all within the wall of self condemnation and self delusion and anxiety, therefore giving homage to the lesser god called fear.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 22, 2014
Surviving Ourselves - something that I believe we must all continuously do.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 22, 2014
to survive ourselves is victory
budd

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on January 21, 2014
In everything we do, feel or cause, the consequences are ours alone. What we make of that is indeed designed to make it all bearable. Sadly however, we don't always make it easier on ourselves.
Rx


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