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Impish Legacy

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

It’s so easy to forget that often it’s the simplicities that keep people happy, not the disguised complexities so often longed for.

Saturday, February 8, 2014


Poem Artwork
Impish Legacy
by Odin Roark

He was like you and me
Arms
Legs
Regrets
Passions

With little that stood out
Save his church-Sunday handshake
His calloused palms
Telling much of
This no-nonsense man

His plaid shirt
Always starting off clean
But wrinkled
Hating to bother anyone
To iron
Wafted oil and soil by midday
The kind sometimes tied
To grease monkey slurs

Labor-ravaged pants
Covered legs of hardlife-stamina
Where given his bumless backside
Help was always needed

But

Snap-of-his-thumbs suspenders
Imprinted proudly with Monroe’s famous
Skirt-blowing pinup
Kept shortcomings intact

Here was an everyday man
With time galloping by
Waiting for no one

He rose at 6
Quick coffee
Out the door
Down the road
8 at the yard
Change this one’s oil
Replace that one’s brakes
Add up the receipts
Take home the earnings
Make another deposit
College won’t be cheap

Leave front door open
Son’s out late

Comfort frail wife
Crawl into bed
Labor’s hand gentle
Jergen’s hand longing
Spooning together
Smiles and pain
Always slow to slumber

So went this life
Until it didn’t

The funeral brought
Many more wafts of oil and grease
Friends of a feather
Still flocking together
With tears and sadness
While upon his face
A subtle smile well known
Belied the crossed hand atop his chest

Some of us knew
He was dreaming
Just one more snap of the suspenders
One last reminder of life

Such became an impish legacy
One who acquired so much
Yet took so little


     


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on February 11, 2014
A beautiful eulogy. M.True

Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on February 9, 2014
Most of us are surrounded by, or have a memory of this man. The same in the millions, who was or are never late for work. The backbone of many an industry. Some of us are him. The one who arrives every morning and leaves in the evening with a hard days work done. The one who, when he says he will do a thing, gets it done and more. I can personally remember many in my life. Love this one Odin. A good piece indeed. Bob

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 9, 2014
So many have lived that life. Hoping that their children would have a better one after college. I wonder if you had some particular person in mind while writing this. The description of the man is quite vivid.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 9, 2014
Wonderful and inspiring poetry, Odin. My grandfather is on my mind now. He was that man. Instead of changing oil and giving brake jobs he plowed the fields up one row and down another his whole life. Your last two lines were kickass.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 9, 2014
An Everyday Man - the best kind. And you've reminded me of one of my favorite quotes:

“I like a bit of a mongrel myself, whether it's a man or a dog; they're the best for every day.” George Bernard Shaw

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 8, 2014
very thoughtful
budd


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