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Rooftop Dancers

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Nature’s symphony needs not speakers to be heard.

Friday, March 28, 2014


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Rooftop Dancers
by Odin Roark

Softly at first
Like feathered footsteps
A butterfly’s delicacy
Foreshadowing awareness

Shortly the tin roof
Becomes a prefaced chorus
Awaiting the entrance
Of spring’s deliverance

Lightning’s timpani discharges
The grand march begins
Motion sways
Penetrates
Punctuates
Like ice picks in a dervish burst

A sudden silence
Clouds move on
Thunderclaps recede

From roof to ground
Nature’s amulets sparkle and reflect sky and tree
Embracing passion’s diminuendo

A jungle becomes pastoral
Sunset’s closure brings remembrance
Joyful weeping is silent
As time prepares to sleep
 
 
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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 29, 2014
I can visualize the sudden downpour on a jungle retreat with a tin roof. I came close to that in Guatemala but the roof above was made of some material, wood or grass, then did not to reverberate. However, I love it when my roof starts to pound letting me know a downpour is occurring outside. Then listening to the water rush off the roof to the sidewalk below.

Wonderful imagery.

Ron
Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on March 29, 2014
Wonderfully onomatopoeic! The sounds are right there in my mind.
Rx
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)
Reviewed on March 28, 2014
Great imagery and sound effect!! Good job on this one!!

Sandie
Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 28, 2014
Each line sparkles with artistry, imagination, and originality.
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 28, 2014
the picture is perfect with this wonderful write
budd
Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on March 28, 2014
Love this. "Rooftop Dancers", perfect description for rain.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 28, 2014
Ahhh . . . There isn't a tin roof over my head at the moment, but it has been raining off and on -- mostly on -- since sometime last night. Wish I did have a tin roof, it'd be perfect then. Enjoyed your poem.
Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
Reviewed on March 28, 2014
Lovely. Beautifullyl done! Amazing descriptions

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