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Bliss Within

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

At times, urban suffocation forces us to retreat. Escape’s paradoxical nature often delivers unexpected solutions. (Image by Mihoko Ogaki)

Sunday, March 30, 2014


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Bliss Within
by Odin Roark

The woods
Your cabin
Your dog
Your significant other

All else in momentary exile

Back there
Where roads go nowhere
Save the insatiable feeding trough
Where gluttonous appetites of fear
Unknowingly eat upon themselves

Where traveling Monday through Friday
Preparing the day’s ever-raging strategy
Anxiously psyching up the all consuming habit
To vent upon
The system
Your mortgage
Your pet
Your domestic confinement
Is but a consuming habit

But now you luxuriate
Your Fido at your feet
Your partner at your side
Both of placid expression
Without animation
Without fear
Without…

Suddenly
Subtle sounds of a
Bucolic woodland paradise
Bristle with their own voracious needs
Nature’s balancing feat
Catching the seasonal winds of contrast
Preparing the now
For what is coming
Creation’s epiphany

Mind‘s chaos is awakened
That back there
Anticipation
Anxiety
Change
Remind you
Beneath the protection
Of woodland cover
Your flickering lit lamp
Isn’t bright enough
To keep reality’s ever changing shadows
At bay
That anywhere is everywhere

Fortunately

Those centered
Discover
An inner light
Void of shadowy distractions
Immune to attachments

The bliss within


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2014
I agree "Those centered" is half of the artichoke heart of this, but the other half of that heart, for me, is "Catching the seasonal winds of contrast," thereby admitting the 'isness' of both center and extremity ends -- complete unawareness at one end and chaos at the other. Joseph Campbell would be proud of this one, Odin. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on March 31, 2014
Ah. Discovering such a place and properly identifying it is one thing, grasping, holding, experiencing it another. Perhaps just knowing the place exists within oneself is enough - a momentary refuge. For it is anxiety which motivates us to gather friends and tubers and wood for the cold, shadowy winter.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 31, 2014
The woods
My cabin
My dogs
My significant other

When I have all of these, I truly have Bliss Within.


Reviewed by Kathy Parenteau
Reviewed on March 30, 2014
Those centered is the most powerful words in this brilliant write. Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

Kathy

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 30, 2014
Last night I watched the documentary, Winnebago Man. This guy whose name is Ed (I forget his last name) was broadcaster back in the day when he says, "the news was just that, news." When news became entertainment, he left and did other things, including an industrial film for Winnebago. It was hot that July and the place was full of flies. There were a lot of outtakes where he burst out in anger and used every swear word in the book.

Anyway, he ended up in a Northern California retreat in a cabin with his dog that has suited him just fine as he was writing his book on what was wrong with America. Without his knowledge, somebody took the outtakes and put them on the Internet, quickly becoming viral. In the documentary, the filmmaker finds Ed and eventually, gets him to come to San Francisco to the Found Film Festival where he becomes a big star among friends.

Sometimes we can come back to the rat race through no account of our own.

Ron

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 30, 2014
HIS PEACE IS 'WITHIN'...ISN'T IT? THAT'S WHY 'WHEREVER' WE ARE WE NEED HIS PEACE/BLISS 'WITHIN' TO SURVIVE. ENJOYED, THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 30, 2014
so very true
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 30, 2014
It is the phrase, "Those centered," which is the key to the poem in my opinion. To be "centered" means you have yourself grounded to what, who, and how you are. Not many of us can relate to being centered, unfortunately.


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