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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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Pretending

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

One has to wonder: Is feigning the act of living honestly rapidly becoming a pandemic? Hopefully, many will overcome the denial. (Image by Turinorodlenn)

Tuesday, April 22, 2014


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Pretending
by Odin Roark

Priming years

Pulpit dogma from lips
Caked of sanguine ploys
Rewards of blessings
Punishments of fire

Ignorance years

Media’s pickpocketing
Wanna-be adults
Working the cravings
Offering eye candy as nutrition
Relegating brains to starvation

Observing years

The agony of hunger
The drool-laden faces
Staring through pizzeria windows
Suffering fun-filled dough throwing
Like a cruel Pavlovian test

Near-death years

Central Park’s homeless
Residing atop benches darkly
Their newspaper blankets
Tucked tight around their dreams
Dancing cheek to cheek

Nightmare years

Variant dogged dreams
Reminding God’s promises
Media’s trolling for vicarious submissions
Hunger’s reality
Security’s vagrancy

Epiphany years

Prized silver spoon success
Tarnishing beneath palm tree splendor
Contemplating manicured beachfront property
Awaiting the next wave
At last craving one big enough
To wash pretension away.





  


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2014
I think your introductory lines are every bit as great as your poetry, Odin. "...vicarious submissions," and "eye candy as nutrition," so much inside your word combinations. How can anyone claim that it has all been said? It hasn't. Fresh writing is better even than a random number generator. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 23, 2014
And so it is always been… The great pretenders. We all are pretenders to the throne, whether it be the pinnacle of wealth or the outhouse. This one got me thinking like crazy.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 23, 2014
Pretending - I believe many live their entire lives pretending, and they miss so much in the process.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 22, 2014
4-23-2014

Voyeurs Of There Own Cause...

TRASK...

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 22, 2014
Given your years working in Hollywood I can understand the spirit of this. But one must tread delicately in these kinds of assessments about humanity and the glut of moral weaknesses that accompany living in a corrupt system. Certainly everyone is guilty at one time or another. Consider... the eye (physical or minds) being the first circle. The horizon which it forms is the second. Throughout all of nature, and life, this exact picture is repeated without end. Each of our lives is an apprenticeship to the unfaltering truth that around every circle (that one person discerns, poetically or otherwise) another circle can be drawn. All we can do is purpose to live honestly and unfeigned.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on April 22, 2014
P.S. Not necessarily in chronological order.

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on April 22, 2014
That's going to have to be one mighty big wave. Rx


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