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Hand In Hand

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

One sometimes takes on a unique companion in life. (Image by nardarshankar)

Tuesday, May 13, 2014


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Hand In Hand
by Odin Roark

I’m getting old you know?
How long has it been?

So many doors we’ve traveled through,
Experienced differently.

Open,
Closed,
Hanging,
Hinged,
Wood,
Metal,
Glass.
So much you’ve taught me.
Opposites do attract
For good reason.

Everywhere we went,
You remained my confidant,
Companion,
Advisor.

You brought so many meanings to me,
From such close up intimacy,
To our sharing of distant places.
You taught me panoramic vistas,
Tender touches of butterflies,
And most importantly,
Insight into that which I could not see.

How helpful you’ve been,
Faithful to a fault, you know.
Even with the times
I became infatuated with a newer companion,
You understood so well
The insecurity crisis
That fouls up so many relationships.

Yes,
You’ve proven to be a classic,
But…
Well…

You’ll have to be left behind soon
The door at the end of this tunnel
Is too bright for you to see
To know
To remember
To save as picture.

Don’t be sad, dear camera.
Hand in hand
We’ll always be.
Our memories are forever
Stored up high in the Cloud


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Reviewed on May 16, 2014
We all need our companions, fun write!

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2014
You had me hook, line and shutter on this one, especially with the line, "I became infatuated with a newer companion." You must have shouldered a pretty big grin writing this one. I sure had one after reading it. ~~ Diana

Reviewed on May 14, 2014
This is so cutely written. This one reminds me of a poem I wrote many years ago about my computer. Also... This poem can be read in more than one way, as to some people, the cameras are within their photogenic memories.

A wonderful write!

Sandie

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
Clever!

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
thank you for taking me to another magnificent journey via the train of your poetry. loved it.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
... Not too sure I'd trust that Cloud, Odin, but the memories shared and stored between you will never grow dim. Lovely open aperture to this and 20/20 vision. And nothing beats the trusty old Zenit I bought second hand for my husband's 21st birthday! Up close and personal as the best of unique relationships always are. xx :)


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