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What To Do

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Not to take away from the once a year reminder of our courageous fallen warriors, but we can only hope we’re not moving toward memorializing some final wars of another kind. (Image by lacrimas)

Saturday, May 24, 2014


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What To Do
by Odin Roark

What might he do,
As underfoot battlefields swell,
Killing’s crudely constructed hate
Readies dismemberment of another warrior
But a step away?

What did you do
When dutiful uniforms knocked at your door
Their faces of telling sadness
Delivering news you didn’t want to hear?

What did I do,
Knowing my power remained
As but one citizen,
One precious vote to cast?

What are we to do
As greed begets more power
Power corrupts the innocent
Innocence succumbs to mockery
Mockery becomes the norm?

Beyond the obvious…

What can be done
When the sun has nothing left to warm,
Rain no thirst to quench,
Wind but dust to blow
Air serving only to suffocate breath?

Might what to do
Be the unanswerable question,
Given we’ve learned so well
War’s propensity for destruction,
Nourishing the quintessential resolve,
Demise by our own self-loathing hand?
  


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2014
Wicked image by lacrimas, a spiney introduction to your piercing poem. Among the many strong lines herein, I choose "Air serving only to suffocate breath?" as the most gasping phrase illustrating this steadily-condensing truth of your answerless question "What To Do." ~~ Diana

Reviewed on May 24, 2014
Great questions to ponder.

Sandie

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 24, 2014

powerful read


Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 24, 2014
This read to me like a petite treatise on the fallen nature of man since the beginning. Nothing's changed. It's just gotten more technological. It's a runaway train that no one can stop. Sadly. Makes me yearn for the Eastern Sierras. Renting horses and going up to 1000 Island Lake in the Ansel Adams wilderness for a few days. Changes your perspective most effectively. Enjoyed this. Peace to you...rlc

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 24, 2014
A lesson you and I have learned. You offer a great challenge here with your admonishment about, "What to do." It should be obvious, shouldn't it?

Ron


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