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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Fate's Game

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Some argue destiny determines everything. Others take the position that free will is part and parcel of cause and effect. Some of us choose to own our own destiny, disallowing it to exist as an outside force. Still, questioning affords ever new perceptions. (Image by David Orias)

Sunday, May 25, 2014


Poem Artwork
Fate’s Game
by Odin Roark

Like innocent spray atop a tsunami curl,
You ride your controlled serendipity,
Delivering surety in an unexpected twist,
Destiny’s setup for drama that follows.

Never satiating your alacrity,
You fish-oil-coat your barbed cunning,
Slipping lathered lures easily
Down gullible throats of anticipation.

For you,
Making another landfall
Is just another layer
Added to your flotsam-beach theatrics,
Designed like playful foreshadowing
For a planned second and third act dénouement.

Oh how you chortle
Amid your game of certainty,
Bedding the unsuspecting like a predestinate,
A loan-out reality guised in wet dream duplicity,
Arousing our trust,
Yet never awarding a curtain call
Of our own choice.

Quandary persists.

After all,
Like nature’s often sardonic casting,
You are fate,
The ever-floating understudy,
An ineluctable wave-curl in waiting,
An unrevealed power we know not of
Until…

   


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Reviewed on May 25, 2014
I don't believe in fate. I only believe in myself what I can or cannot do about my life. Most fates are created when people call them "fates", like they sit on their asses and don't do anything for themselves and then fail, and then they call it "fate", and then blame God and anything under the sun, leaving themselves out of the blame.

Life is a continuous process of "living" and changing, there won't be any conclusion to our lives until our deaths. There is no such thing as "fate" when you're still living your life and still have chance to make changes. When you're finally on your death bed and you don't know why you are dying, then you can call it "fate".

Sandie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 25, 2014
For some reason so many seem to try to find a prescription for fate. Your analogies are powerful in describing the ways that we try to overcome fate as though we had that power.

For me, I just do the best I can, knowing that, eventually fate will catch up with all of my plans and wreck them. But I am relaxed and willing to accept that, knowing that I will start again or not, depending upon my fate.

Ron


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