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Awakening Perpetually

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As we all know, it’s easy to become downtrodden with modernity’s demands. To stop and change focus, reflect on the past, accept the present, and trust in the future, is perhaps one of our few options. (Image by Tony Karp)

Monday, May 26, 2014


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Awakening Perpetually
by Odin Roark

Awakening perpetually knows well
Perfection’s tuning fork disquietude,
Its awareness that any off-key meandering
Can cloud over a caressing sunshine rising,
Sour a dawning’s gardenia fragrance.

One reaches skyward with morning’s extension,
The opening of shuddered windows,
Inviting breezes to find purpose
Among slumber’s expended air,
The body’s unwearied resilience.

About the room
Timeless ghosts bow heads and implore with stretched arms,
Aroused by their history’s carillon, matins and lauds,
Even as cobblestone passage below traffics today’s gluttonous appetite,
Fulfilling its locust-like consumption,
Unabated by cacophony’s garrulous conceit
Propelling a different consciousness
Self-destructing by tourismic mayhem.

But…

To step forward and lean on man’s balcony of hope,
Is to lift weary eyes above the clutter below
Onto rising light’s warm-colored horizon,
To give one’s tuning fork its earned reward,
The sense of harmony and melody
Being born of another day.

Such is the embrace of dawn’s meaning,
The anticipation of canvas to paint,
Verses to write,
Preludes to compose.

For lest we forget,
Awakening remains perpetual,
Whether for man, creature, seedling or flower.
It asks only to be honored.

    


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 27, 2014
A lot to ponder. I read recently where New York City is one of the fastest-growing places in America. How is that possible with the extreme cost of living there and the lack of space? Our tendency to forget the past (in a good way, saving good memories and rejecting bad), leads us to worry about the tumultuous present. I would challenge anyone from the present struggling with NYC to be dropped there as a new arrival in 1876 or some other past time and discover that 2014 with all of its consumption is a piece of cake (or pizza slice if you prefer) compared to almost any time in the past.

And the future will be even better, thanks to Donald Trump and other fearless empire builders, I double damn guarantee it!

Ron

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 27, 2014


well done


Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2014
Odin, you have created a piece here that feels to me like a most unusual piece of jewelry....a ring perhaps, with a crusty, gawdy scribble of a setting, but centered therein, a most solid, dimensional solitaire diamond. The clack and clutter setting, the Hope Diamond. Exquisite. Of course I had to read through "Awakening Perpetually" about four times and look up some words (carillon, matin, laud), but that is the magnificent way of your poetry. Your writing is a study and once is never enough. ~~ Diana

Reviewed on May 27, 2014
We can either look forward to a brand new day, and brand new plan. brand new horizon when we wake up in the morning; or we can continuing to dwell in yesterday's wasteful unhappiness. It's all up to us to decide.

Sandie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 27, 2014
Such is the embrace of dawn’s meaning,
The anticipation of canvas to paint,
Verses to write,
Preludes to compose.

Each new dawn brings so many new possibilities, all we have to do is look for them.


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