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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Preference Manifest

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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Twirly Things

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Remembering the Foss balance and motion kits in school, for the fortunate the lessons continued to transcend the obvious. (Image by kinwicked)

Wednesday, May 28, 2014


Poem Artwork
Twirly Things
by Odin Roark

Loneliness,
The ever-aware sadness never knowing,
Did stumble about untouched
Awaiting enigma’s shadow
To enter into the light.

Came that special day
It did awaken,
As curled atop summer grass
The young boy made simple discovery.

So unadorned came the moment,
As laying upon his back,
A mere release of breath
Sent dandelion umbrellas afloat,
Their landing a graceful message upon his chest…

“Awaken your heart,”
Did they whisper,
“For challenge awaits
beyond youthful innocence.”

So many years trailed behind,
Where among trampled grasses of trial and error
Memory’s favorite messenger,
This weed of delicate flight,
Remained his companion of conscience,
Childhood’s compassionate gift.

How precious was discovery,
Introduced once as a gently landing twirly thing,
Quietly delivering a weathered warrior called love,
Life's protection for man's vulnerable tenderness...
Within.
   


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Reviewed on June 1, 2014
Very nice

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on May 29, 2014
reading this was such a delight.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 29, 2014
How precious was discovery,
Introduced once as a gently landing twirly thing

How precious indeed, and a marvelous poem.

Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on May 28, 2014
Love it when I can visualize it as I read it. Awesome, love this and how gracefully it flows.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 28, 2014

I like this


Reviewed on May 28, 2014
It's a wonder how your mind would travel so far away with all kinds of memories and imagination...

Sandie


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