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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Freezer Burn (rewrite)

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Love’s attempt to preserve itself sometimes goes wrong especially when its appreciation is but only object oriented. Fortunately, some of us understand that and can move on beyond the illusive allure. (Image by obsoleteangel)

Wednesday, July 16, 2014


Poem Artwork
Freezer Burn
by Odin Roark

How gently we savor love's hors d'oeuvres,
Knowing not
Even in reserved bites
Appetites can rise,
Luring satiation into unguarded repose
While senses become numbed
To seduction’s imbibing gentleness.

As time passes,
How appalled we become
When spoilage seemed avoided,
Sealed long-term preservation secured.

Suffocated love,
Life’s alarm for fragile illusions,
Suffers the inevitable freezer burn.

Still,
For many,
Love’s knowledge requires learning,
Otherwise ignorance continues
Blindly repeating yesterday’s false impression.


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on July 19, 2014
The preservation of love, now that's a good one! Perhaps better preserved in the crisper? M.True

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 16, 2014

thought provoking read

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 16, 2014
The blindness of love often results in a frozen relationship that if not thawed out, certainly results in freezer burn of the worst kind.

Wonderful allegory.

Ron


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