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Imagined Body Exit

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For some of us, there is more time than others to explore the possibilities after death. For others, there’s but the moment rapidly approaching made finite by fear.(Image by caras ionut)

Sunday, August 24, 2014


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Imagined Body Exit
by Odin Roark

He lay in hospital
What lies beyond?

Clouds
Angels,
Pearly Gates,
Or…

Leaving the body
He surmises is…

Imaginative?

Perhaps an understatement,
For without weight and limbs,
As many picture the ethereal,
Gravity would be irrelevant,
Yes?

Might there be but floating?

He considers.
Or is there fusion,
A merging of existence
A finding of coalescence within a… something,
Or is there but a long journey into the void,
Awaiting the circumstantial attachment,
A finding of use perhaps forever alive
In that yet discovered place,
That yet imagined after death relay?

Such fills the waning hours of sustained life
Kept manifest by tubes, wires, and the incessant sounds
Those beeping measures of life
Counting down to the inevitable moment
When breath’s closure
Brings cessation to the sentiment of specie superiority.

The body exit…

Perhaps but another beginning
We’ve never imagined.








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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on August 25, 2014
I have often wondered why there was no Book of Lazarus. Surely someone must have asked questions... M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 25, 2014
This reminds me of the movie, "What Dreams May Come." Asking the age-old question that so many spend so much time with as they prepare to go to their preferred "heaven" or "hell." It's interesting that Robin Williams was starring actor in that wondrous piece of fantasy. Did he want to get there in a hurry?

As an existentialist, I'm spending my time on this side of death with no contemplation of what comes after my light is extinguished or even disabled where I am merely hooked up to devices and by brain no longer has any cognitive thought. Time to turn out the light and say good night.

Ron

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on August 25, 2014
A great imaginary poetic song! Yes, we will all leave this earth some how one by one. We either believe in the Bible or make up a imaginary scenario. Regardless, Albert Einstein was among the smartest man to walk the earth said that a Creator must have designed the universe for it is mathematically impossible to think it happened JUST BY chance....


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