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Ubiquitous Shadows

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Shadows play many roles in life, casting themselves on playful as well as tragic stages. (Image by Stanculescu)

Tuesday, November 11, 2014


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Ubiquitous Shadows
by Odin Roark

To run,
To walk,
To escape the shadows
Where hiding is not an option,
Lays bare one’s isolation.

Like a suffocating vapor,
Grayness wraps around yesterday,
Rendering tomorrow colorless,
Extending time as but ghostly fragments
Seeking resolve.

Outside…

Mounds of darkened existence,
Buildings,
Trees,
The undying subway L
Beneath pervasive construction cranes,
Crowd together further shadows
Chronicling time passing to many,
Yet oh so intimate its specter to some.

Inside…

Furtive lips purse softly the soothing hum,
The sound that helps ease guilt and remorse,
The ohm that only few hear,
The garroting shadows still others sadly perceive,
The behind-phantom-bars feeling many steadfastly hide,
The many guises depression knows all too well.
  


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 12, 2014
While shadows are welcome in the heat of the desert, they can be depressing in a large city where the chance for sunlight to reach the streets is much lessened. Those mean streets can also be depressing. Hence, the tone of your poem.

I've also been intrigued by shadows that are following the bright stars and making sure that these stars shine even brighter… The unseen administrative assistants, valets and others who wait in the shadow of service.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on November 12, 2014
Sinister and illuminating, Odin. Unfortunately, all too many hear that ohm, the one which so resists the brightness and gives too much value to guilt and remorse. And yet without the play of glare and shadow we, like the Earth, would be barren and lifeless as the Moon. You so often show us how flexible and durable this Chinese opera forces us to be.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 11, 2014
Somewhat histrionic (this piece) but I was caught by these two words, "garroting shadows", which develop an interesting image of depression strangling you. I explored this in my piece: 'Black Dog'. A subject easy to relate to - especially for anyone who has lived past 50 on this planet. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 11, 2014
The shadows we accumulate and jump at gather a gloom that is both within and without, making the world a crowded place for those who just want to run and hide. It can be very oppressive to not even be able to shake our own shadow when it seems to hang at our shoulder and condemn. This is a very insightful view of depression, Odin. I guess Peter Pan's shadow-write might be of the more playful variety! :) xx


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