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One's Own Slipstream

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Leading up to one’s reflective time, one often becomes aware (or coerced) into believing the “free ride,” not yet aware that when all is said and done, there is always a price. How revealing the journey for those who pay attention and respect the oblique as answers in hiding.

Thursday, December 18, 2014


Poem Artwork
One’s Own Slipstream
by Odin Roark

Movement frozen
Knows of risks in waiting.

Three lanes,
Seven lanes,
Life’s autobahn,
Always beckoning,
Seduction to follow.
Isn't that what it's all about?

Starting way back…

A grade school playground,
Force takes power.
To stay on side lines,
Failure.
The longing to steer into the "follow" lane,
Surge to the power's fast lane,
Grab the pull,
The bully in front,
Breaking resistance,
Its girth of momentum unstoppable.
You glimpse for the first time…Free rides,
No risk,
Cocooned safety.

School yards,
I-Hop revisits,
GPA encroachment,
Graduation,
Freedom,
Pedal to the metal.

"The World is a Vampire"
You know not,
Not yet.

The interview
The job
The greater pull,
Fast lane in view,
Entrance ramp available.

Quintessential speed…yes.

Follow the leader,
Rise to the top,
Meet the power,
Meet the future spouse,
Ah,
The speed,
The even greater pull,
The free ride really looks free.

Perpetual hang-overs follow…

The grind,
The history,
The babies,
The promotions,
The divorces,
The...
The...

Finally the peace…

The return,
The dirt roads,
The two wheeled bike,
The ruts,
The flats,
The...
The...

Discovering one’s own slipstream,

Nirvana.
   


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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 20, 2014
Slipstream... much in the subtext here that this reader can associate with. Also a great word for delineating the backwash of a persons forward momentum. It can also aptly address a position someone can take behind someone whose momentum they want to take advantage of. How many leeches in our lives have fallen into our hard-fought slipstreams to take advantage of us. Peace and health; IMO two of the most important attributes in a person's life. Always your work, Odin, is an honest, and unpretentious, exploration of mind and heart and so appreciated by this reader. Thank you for all your intelligent kindness the last few years. Peace to you...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 20, 2014

well done, enjoyed the read


Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on December 20, 2014
This appears to be life as a jet setter. I was never able to move fast enough to create a slip stream. I knew only hurdles, obstacles, and back stabbers so plentiful that it has been hand-to-hand combat all the way. But the finish line appears to be the same. We're both exhausted. Nirvana? Maybe.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 20, 2014
Finally the peace…
Discovering one’s own slipstream,

And I think well worth the long ride.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 19, 2014
Another "life in a poem" that you do so well. This one focuses on the accelerated pace of modern life where we don't take "paths" anymore, but move quickly into the "fast lanes" of the freeway that life offers to us. The key to your poem is the word, "free." It means taking the easy way out and eventually turns into a nightmare, until we go back to the slow lane of just walking paths.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 18, 2014
Are you sure you did not read my unwritten biography (probably more likely to be my autobiography)? Well done, Odin. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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