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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Candle-Life

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Even with so many ideas worth personifying, the candle holds seemingly infinite possibilities.

Monday, December 29, 2014


Poem Artwork
Candle-Life
by Odin Roark

Wicks held captive,
Protected embryos held in tethered limbo
Awaiting the moment
When life is aflame.

How varied the shimmering first breath,
Whether beneath a citadel of worship,
A first birthday,
A stealth venture into the attic,
Or an exploration of one's personal catacombs.

Such a simple tool this,
Made companion to realms of imagination
Perhaps a comfort-place of isolation
Where one's dreams and fears,
Await the ever-faithful flame of illumination.

For just as birth awaits its singular reality,
So too the protected string,
Encased in its molten womb,
Knows that to be
Is to burn.

Only the candle knows
Its glimmering heat
Its brightness flickering
Seeks no identity to possess,
But solely to serve.

And of this life
This candle that lives but to burn,
Is beholden to the desire of one's need,
One's willingness to allow the flame its freedom,
Even as it knowingly accepts eventual dimming,
When expended radiance will retire,
Hoping its life is only at rest.

With sadness,
It lies before the many boxed candles
Ensconced in their own kind of darkness,
Their reward of being alive
Yet to ignite.


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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 30, 2014
The subtext in this is, at the same moment, multi-faceted and personal. I have always deeply related to the candle as a metaphor for an individuals life. I've lost track of how many times life's windy storms have extinguished my flame, my momentum, my desire, my focus, my output. Somehow, though, by means infinitely more mysterious than my ability to comprehend, the flame invariably crackles back into life and a new season begins. I imagine that we can only consider it a major blessing if our personal candles burn all the way down. Enjoyed, and appreciated, this, Odin...

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on December 30, 2014
Beautifully written.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 30, 2014
A first birthday,
A stealth venture into the attic,
Or an exploration of one's personal catacombs

Candles are marvelous, as is your poem. We need to light up the world with them.


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